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Jarvy Jared


A writer and musician trying to be decent at both things. Here, you'll find some of my attempts at storytelling!

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This story is a sequel to A Prose By Any Other Name


One week after his return, Opacare Prose must delve into the streets of Manehattan to stop the corruption that has been brewing within its steel skyscrapers. It seems like an easy job; stop Mayor Grifford Finch, reveal his corrupted ways, and help Manehattan return to its former glory.

But all is not as it seems. Behind Prose's one-stallion war against his former friend, is a shadow of an organization bent on one thing, and one thing only: the complete annihilation of the author and the mayor. As the two ex-friends exchange words and blows, culminating in an explosive confrontation, that organization from behind the scenes makes it move gradually, determined to take Manehattan over without either noticing.

If Opacare Prose has any hope of saving his city, then he must accept the assistance of the mares from Ponyville, as well as forge unlikely alliances with any pony willing to side with him. His goal of stopping Grifford Finch will eventually overlap to other goals, ones that, he will discover, are far more important.

He can't save everything, though... as his war continues, casualties will rise, and somepony important to him could be forever lost...

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 9 )

Things are getting quite complicated. Apparently Grifford is not the only thing that Prose should worry about...

Indeed, Jarvy. Indeed.

7116788 I trust you enjoyed that ending?

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Oh, most certainly. In fact, I wish that I could see more of this sort of thing from other writers. Much like Chessie's Starlight Over Detrot. Now that is a tasty tale. As is this.

Manehattan never gets enough love.

7117046 Thank you! I've always had a soft spot for anything that had noir elements to it. Glad to know you're enjoying so far. Hopefully you'll look forward to more in the future!

Oh crap! What's going to happen next?!?

7117169 Can't tell you; you'll have to wait a bit. ;)

Oh no! The Oparity ship is sinking! Quick, everyone, to the Swolity!

Six chapters in... and not a single comment?

Most unusual.

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