I'm surprised that nopony has reviewed this story yet, I mean I've been tracking it on FFN and I know that is darn good. So far good start. ~Celestia's Paladin: Ex Solis et Lunae, Providentia et Prospera

>>3756037560 Thanks. I'm glad you like it. I find fimfiction.net's editing and posting to be actually far easier than ff.net's.

Hmm i must say this is quite good. i assume the dragon is the one that was in the spike ep (And saw spike eating its stash.) hmm, i bet she be surprise that even this applejack is different than the one she knows. (With celestia and luna surprise that megan has returned.

Interesting. pretty good thus far, (I wonder how you will incorporate Discord.)

Cool (Wonder how Megan will react to Zecora, sense the last zebra she saw was Arabus lackey Zeb or at the very least the CMC.)

The dragon dialogue has to be my favorite part of the story so far.

Not that the rest so far isn't awesome too, but c'mon!  Dragons!

nice work

its as good as always (And yeah i can understand megan fear, some humans are jerkwads!! hope megan see the cmc next.

ps lol at the phone scene

Good interaction with the dragons. and the drama was well done.

Interesting so far (I still see rosedust being abit antagonistic, memories of the Draconequues still fresh in her mind.) also macintosh reaction the the bushwoolies is believable (Sense he did take the smarty pants doll.)

also blueblood seems scared of this (Heh knowing that jerkoff he probably working with bad guys)

heres something also good story

http://aleximusprime.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4gsrww

Hello like the story thus far, will you add rarity parents?

And with this, I have caught up to the versions published on spacebattles and fanfiction.net. So updates will be a little slower now.

>>3921639216 Should have done a single update per day. Would probably have gotten more hits as more people have time to notice it up on the 'Updates' page.

Finally......caught......up......

My eyes......hurt....like hell....

Couldn't stop reading......story was too interesting

.......my eyes....

good work! i wonder what the kids reaction will be of zecora (And please sweetie we all know the reason you have a two color mane is because your mother skin is pink... speaking of there parents did you notice rarity sorta looks like a ponified version of magnum.) and it could have been worse daniel (It could have been snake charmers.)

Sorta cute that Twi doesn't quite realize how closely the two worlds parallel, isn't it?

Loving this. Mostly because it isn't full of g1 bashing.

Only 18 reviews? Man some people aren't knowing what they are missing. The world gets more and more complex and intertwined between the generations with each new chapter. You are doing a great job at that.

Regards,

Celestia's Paladin

>>4947249472

Thanks. I am... used to my stories not getting much attention, no matter the genre or whatnot. *Shrug*

Cute chapter, CMC antics and filly pictures of Woona...

Good chapter as always so I guess next chapter is the party, and Big Mac confessing to Fluttershy... aw shoot no twimac then... meh shipping is the focus so what the hay.

Celestia's Paladin

But, but surely we readers get to see the photos? Pwweeessse?

Only think I've spoted on this first read through is that I don't see Rarity addressing roylty as 'Dear' other than that? Awesome : )

Ah, good.....you did promise that Ditzy would return. Also, with all the craziness that's happened since the Ursa Minor incident, I really don't think that Trixie has to worry about how she'll be received.

Dwead Piwat Woona... it's right up there with Metal Gear Woona.

>>3930339303 Ah quit complaining. I've read a 101 chapter fanfic that had over 370 thousand words in about five days. This is nothing.

mei long reminds me of american dragon/jake long

autobots really

mei long reminds me of american dragon/jake long

autobots really

Ah, now the 'Alternate Universe' tag reveals itself.

Autobots on Earth, Autobots...I'll be honest I never expected 'Autobot's' to be reference in a Pony Fiction.

Meh- Spykoran shrugging off Fluttershy like that- not cool. Takes away much of her character to show off the power of your OC.

And yes, Spykoran is your OC.

On the other hand, Trixie/Flutterpony interaction was nice.

I think I'll respond, then every ten comments do a mass response.

>>3806038060 Yeah, from Owl's Well that Ends Well. And yeah, surprises all around.

>>3806338063 Very carefully. ;)

>>3809238092 Hmm, might have to rewatch that one. But I don't think Megan judges on species.

>>3818838188 Yeah, the dragon dialogue is fun to write. We're talking Luna-class ham.

>>3916439164 Thanks, but nope. Blueblood simply knows the prophecies concerning the Mag'ne.

>>3924739247 Hmm, was not aware of that. Ah, well.

>>3930339303 *Hands over an ice pack*

>>3934839348 No one really realizes how it was in that period of time, methinks.

>>4671446714 G1... I found wasn't that bad. But thanks. I never bash... most of the time.

>>6216762167 LOL, TwiMac is good, but I prefer Twixie and Fluttermac. Love and tolerate, right?

>>6216962169 Oh, you'll see them! More than just emo-Celly, too.

>>6221662216 Perhaps, but she sees her own behavior in a new light. I don't think she did as much wrong as some people do, but I fully acknowledge she did some wrong.

>>6361363613 I just might have that photo show up, especially since in RL there were Metal Gear games while the original Rainbow Bridge was open.

>>107964107964 Never seen that show, and yes. really. This is 'Hasbro Earth'. The president? Clayton Abernathy.

>>108448108448 I actually have two TF/MLP fics in the planning stages. G1/FiM, both of them.

>>108627108627 No... he's not. He's G1 Spike all grown up. He's over 1500 years old. He's king of the Dragon Clans. I'm sorry, but I really don't see the problem of him not being taken down by the Stare. But... thank you for the compliment about Trixie and the Flutter ponies. I honestly believe Trixie's a good pony at heart.

>>108674108674

True that; well, at least she has somepony in her corner.

>>108674108674

Love and Tolerate, Forgive and Forget, I live by the Brony Code. And I rather not get dragged into a shipping war, I know how nasty those can get

Good story (I am quite immune to pairing mostly so i say do whatever you feel like.) btw apparently greed is like steroids to dragon (Its make them bigger but they get dumber by results.) btw what are your thoughts on hearth warming eve.

I really hate how everyone thinks that a character (OC or not) can't be stronger/better/smarter etc than the mane 6. Those girls have their own flaws too, which is why they are so easy to relate to. If Fluttershy had been able to stare down the freakin KING OF ALL DRAGONS then it wouldn't have been very believable. He was easy going about the whole thing so I don't see the big deal.

>>108674108674

I know he's supposed to be grown-up G1 Spike, but apart from the name he doesn't really have much in common with him. Spykoran, king of the dragons, is pretty much your creation.

Perhaps I should clarify my problem: There are only a very handful of scenes in which Fluttershy uses the Stare (3 I believe), in contrast to a truckload of problems she could've solved with it. Apart form two episodes, the Stare is treated as something that doesn't exist, like the Pinkie Sense. It was included here, in this story, but only to show off how big and powerful and overwhelming Spykoran is. Some people like that, some don't. I'm one of the latter.

New chapter... After reading it, I feel warm inside, it was so beautiful... I only wish, that you'd update more often.

Good job on adding some of Hearth Warming Eve into it. So the ponies think Kentucky is heaven?

THE D'AAAAWWWWW HATH BEEN DOUBLED!!!! (Not that there's anything wrong with that.)

Platinum x Blueblood? Oh, the irony.

WHY CAN'T I HOLD

ALL THIS FANON

>>162846162846 And around ten thousands years latter their reincarnations hate each other to the core of their beings

cant wait for fluttershy to find out about kentucky fried chicken

>>162846162846>>163557163557

Umm, guys? Platinum was Blueblood's daughter.

Um... Isn't there someone missing from that garden? What about the pony that went and got Megan in the first place. Shouldn't Firefly get a mention?!

Or is she getting a bigger mamorial later on?

>>209224209224

Huh, you're right. I missed that he was a king here, and not a prince. Epic whoops!

It's still ironic, though.

>>108691108691 She's got a lot of fans. ;) And I like I said, Trixie's not perfect. But compared to pretty much every other antagonist in the show? SHe's practically a saint!

>>110513110513 lol, no war here. As I said, I prefer Twixie and Fluttermac, but one of my favorite stories is Kindness' Reward, which is Trixieshy. As long as it's written well, I can read and enjoy it. Beats the Avatar shipping wars to high heaven....

>>110513110513 There's... some discussion, considering how different Spike is compared to other dragons. I don't think it'd be all at once like with him. HWE? Great episode, surprisingly easy to integrate here.

>>110826110826 Yes, thank you! Applejack was beaten by other ponies in Last Roundup, Dash hurt herself in Read it and Weep. And he's a 1500-year old King of the Dragon Clans, older than the princesses.

>>116374116374 He already has been shown as powerful, being King of all dragons? And again, he's not my creation. Does making Twilight an Alicorn turn her into an OC? Nope. I'm sorry if you don't like it, but that's him. He's G1 Spike after 1500 years.

>>162558162558 Thanks! Next chapter has been sent to the proofreader. He's good.

>>162606162606 Well, it's been incorporated into their heaven. They had a Herd before, just adding the Mag'ne and Key'Tuck to it.

>>162627162627 D'aww is good, especially young pre-Canterlock Luna to it.

>>163034163034 *Hands a bucket over* That enough?

>>209224209224 Yes, thank you. Well, Blueblood I's daughter and Blueblood II's sister at least.

>>209538209538 Welll... couldn't show everypony. I didn't mention Surprise, or Mimic or Lickety-Split after all.

>>218459218459

Epona and Gaea must have a field day about that, and Sejr is probably laughing her flank off.

I'm enjoying this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Ah....it's good to see Morning Glory coming out of her shell after so long. All they need do is rid themselves of an ugly, misshapen paperweight that sounds as if it's about to insult Lt Worf and they're all set.

Savior of the Worlds: Solving old problems with one accidental world.

"It's like being at a reunion concert for Jem and the Holograms!”

No. Just no. Please show some decency. There are worst things in the Hasbro cataloge than the new Transformers movies.

>>230390230390 The FCC was snooping around a few chapters ago, how long 'til they find the rainbow hole and call in some specialists? Like G.I. Joe? Or the Autobots that were also mentioned?

Suddenly HASBRO!

>>233085233085

Um... I mentioned the FCC in another post on another site... Is the reply system working right? Or alteratively is it working really really well??!

The real FCC can find a signal source almost instantly using GPS-like techniques. This FCC has to operated under 'no BVR combat' hasbroverse rules, but I'd still expect there to be a welcome party of either test engineers or GI Joes when Magen goes home.

Beyond that I expect the gateway between the two worlds to be easily accessable via a 'Go Go Joe Absurdity' tower crane or a Go Go Joe Absurdity cargo blimp.

>>233184233184 It's in the story in chapter eleven on this website. About halfway down the page. Did you include it at the suggestion of a reader on that other site and forget about it, or upload the wrong version?

>>234978234978

Um... I'm not the author. That's RK_Striker_JK_5 at the top of the page whose picture doesn't match my own. :P

I mentioned it to the author on the fanfiction.net site. Near the bottom of this page here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/r/7222615/

I'm just speculating based on the reasons I gave there, and on my vague memories of the 'rules' in the old GIJ show and TV Tropes. .

>>235335235335 Whoops, my mistake.

Still doesn't change what's in the story (the FCC scene) on this website. And it's in the Fanfiction.Net version in chapter twelve...

Very impressive story.  I'm actually very surprised that this is the first story with Megan in it that I've seen!  I guess there aren't a whole lot of fans of the original My Little Ponies here?

Anyway, great story.  I was, if you hadn't guessed, a fan of the original series, although I can't deny I like the current one even better.  Still, Megan was a personal favorite.  I'm really glad to see someone writing about her return to Equestria... and I'm really glad you're doing it with some skill.

Keep up the good work.  I'm looking forward to more.

>>218502218502 Laughter rang out, but it was good-natured, since Megan's cool.

>>226236226236 Thanks! next chapter's sent to proofreader, but it's a long one.

>>229297229297 Gonna be difficult, actually. Well, to get Discord out of stone. Celestia's been reminded of him and Twilight and Megan know of him now, after all. And I don't like intentional idiot balls.

>>229310229310 it's how Megan rolls.

>>230390230390 Actually... I rather liked Jem. And I bought the series boxed set and found it to... not be that bad. Rather good character development and catchy songs.

>>233085233085 Maybe... I do plan on there being official contact between Earth and Equestria, at least. Probably the Dragon Clans too and possibly the rest of the planet, like the mentioned 'Griffin Empire'.

>>293686293686 Thanks. I like G1 too and find it to be a bit better than some people think. Ah, well. And yes, I find FiM to be better too. And thanks, I try my best with my writing.

Just read the first chapter. No experience with pre-G4 ponies, but the writing looks decent and you've got a decent hook. Reading on.

M'kay, Equestrians on earth, apparently shifting to humans in Equestria. Seems a bit slow at the start of the chapter (but that's probably just me being whiny and impatient), but keeps me hooked. Reading on.

K, now I'm really starting to get into this. Hooked now.

Will the fact that in canon, Star Swirl the Bearded created a number of time related spells throw off anything in your story?

I think there's a bit much of everybody declaring, "I was a fool!"  It's like you're so eager to avoid having the characters berate each other for mistakes that instead you just have them pre-emptively self-berate.  But you know, I think that if a character acted in a way that seemed reasonable enough to them at the time based on the facts they knew then, then most characters (who aren't Fluttershy) are going to defend themselves at least a little.

Amazing Tale of Friendship and Sadness

Shedding a single tear is so very Trixie.

P.S. First.

>>313221313221 Thanks and thanks for the review, too. I'm gonna try for more 'tension' as you suggested.

>>332164332164 Not sure. If it can fit, then yeah. Heck, might have him and Spellion show up for the heck of it.

>>361899361899 Well, for some of them, they've had a long time to stew on their mistakes. I'll try to have them... defend themselves a bit more? Make it better?

>>432586432586 Thanks.

So that's your take on Luna's Fall... I have wondered how you would do the collapse of the old castle Paradise City? Though I'm still trying to wrap my head around the fact Gem, MLP, and TFG1/2 all exist in the same universe.

tiny buzzing wings?

THAT DRAGONS A SCOOTALOO!

That's going to be an interesting conversation. "Good morning! Avon calling! Would you be interested in a lovely air strike?"

I imagine the range of responces Hasbroverse America has for such situations is mostly the same as OTL America, though I look forwards to finding out what order they put them in.

So, what exactly did Granny Smith want to tell AJ?  She got distracted by talking about the afterlife, and didn't seem to come back to whatever she was originally there to talk about.

>>439590439590

Doesn't seem to have the attitude of aggression, more just wanting to know what's going on, and making sure it's not a threat.  One doesn't just "Let them get some sleep" like that.

Hmmm.......Shipwreck and Chip from Transformers.....the plot thickens!!!!

I will try to understand this fiction.

(Have no experiens form G1, G2 or G3.)

I can only say this: Wow!

>>313221313221well all i can say is that G2 and G3 were kind of terrible, G1 actually resembles G4 somewhat.

>>313288313288

A bit slow in the start? I fealt a bit like reading the first Artemis Fowl book whit how slow this chapter worked for me. But it was good.

This is good things.

so....is THIS one Platinum and the other two didn't get unfrozen?

Then, next morning, they get a visit from this man.

Image: http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100621095821/half-life/en/images/thumb/2/27/G-man_heart_to_heart_headshot.jpg/250px-G-man_heart_to_heart_headshot.jpg

Awww maaaaaan, now I have to wait for another awesome chapter again.

Seriously though, I love this and can't wait for the next chapter.

>>439652439652

How they want things to work out, and what they'll be willing to do if everything goes bad, are two very different things. Airstrike would be one of the middling options, somewhere between a stiff talking to reguarding the unconstitutionality of forming independent foreign policy, and calling in a nuclear strike.

hmmm, so trixie changed, AWSOME!!!!!!

I have to tell you that I love you for writing this story. It is just that good

Spanish Steel? Well I wonder where they got Spanish from but I don't question it more then that.

1500 years?! Wow, Megan realy have an excuse now to be shocked. Much have changed on one and a half milenium.

>>439600439600

my guess is that Applejack ...AJ is related to the 'original' Appljack, just as Twilight seems to be related to her namesake.

im just wondering what luna did to danny for him to be in a wheel chair

i have a felling that megan is going to make discord hurt

Shipwreck's an admiral now!? I don't know whether to be impressed or frightened (I recently saw an episode where he, Dial-tone and Lifeline were all promoted as some plot by Cobra to screw with the Joe's command structure).

This fic ceases to dissappoint and is laced with all sorts of little surprises and nods that add to the fun. Particularly like how you used the un-used scene from the movie in your story.

Now for the big questions other than when's the next chapter. Is this Hasbro earth limited to just the Sunbow shows of the 80's or do you cherry pick anything that looks good from any era as long as it's  within Hasbro's catalog?  And is this before Optimus's 1st death or after his 2nd death?

Keep up the stellar work!

>>439374439374 I could see the two arguing the entire time, not even noticing their surroundings.

Good chapter.

>>439542439542 Paradise City is what paradise Estate became, basically. And heck, it's partial canon from the old series.

>>439564439564 No, Scootaloo's a dragon!

>>439590439590 yeah... no. No airstrike on a residential neighborhood in Kentucky. No airstrike period.

>>439600439600 Shadow Star's got it, mostly. She kinda wandered off. Granny Smith tends to do that on occasion.

>>439652439652 Bingo. I am not doing some sort of... misunderstanding that leads to war or something like that.

>>439726439726 Don't forget Jem.

>>440079440079 My thoughts as well. G1 wasn't great... but it honestly wasn't that bad.

>>440612440612 All three are still pony popsicles in the cave, awaiting their time to awaken...

>>440856440856 I have... no clue who that is.

>>440892440892 Thanks, and already started on the next one.

>>442597442597 How is Megan setting foreign policy? She went to help with a dragon and visited Celestia and Luna. No... trade talks or anything like that. I'm sorry, but no airstrike here. Or anything bad happening to Megan and her family.

>>442597442597 More like she realized revenge is not a good path. I'll be dealing with Boast Busters here and in Spanner in the Works.

>>442983442983 Ah... thanks. :)

>>444443444443 yeah, a lot's changed, as you'll see later on.

>>446062446062 If he gets released here...

>>447062447062 I'm... glad it ceased to disappoint. As for Prime, it's mid-2011, he's alive and leading Cybertron into a second Golden Age, while Earth is entering one as well.

>>447136447136 LOL, then I might include it for that reason alone.

>>450966450966 Thanks.

>>452631452631

I didn't. Hmmmmm.....note to self: speculate on how the Holograms would react to the Mane Six.

>>452631452631

That's what I was figuring, and I'll take your word about TF and Gem. And I've watched the pilot of MLPG1... I can agree with your statement, it wasn't that bad, just full of plot holes and Deus ex Machinas... and Sea Ponies, can't forget the Sea Ponies.

Top class work.

Good chapter.

As always.

Good chapter.

I can realy understand Megans fear there.

I realy hate when Twilight goes into high panic mode. It is scary.

I'm speechless again.

Good chapter. But I have a bit hard to enjoy it. It must be that my head is in pain.

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