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Nikkori
Not some cringy idol fan. Fimfiction wouldn't let me use 矢澤にこ.
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I'm surprised this doesn't have comments. It's a nice story, some good character development (I liked the hints at mental illness), but it could use an editor----there were a few grammatical errors, but all in all, good show.
7216201 Yeah, in my world, DT, growing up like that has a fragile mentality, and after the Dazzlings attack, it got worse, so she can snap like a twig sometimes... and this was written on a whim, in 15 minutes, without editing. I'll check it a bit more later.
Don't wanna be rude but I think all the words in the title should be capitalized,"Our Past" and on the chapter titles,"A Diamond Shines". Other than that it was a pretty good story.