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This story is a sequel to Exposing Anon-A-Miss


After Anon-A-Miss, Apple Bloom is depressed and lonely. She's separated from her friends and has lost the trust and respect of her big sister.

Then she receives a note from her most hated enemy.

But there might be a silver lining.

We shall see.

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Comments ( 27 )

Sunset and Diamond make a scary team. Really nice follow up, though it still feels like it should be a series.

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I already have a full time series on fanfiction.net. These are just bits I do when I can.

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But when you write a fic, you gotta fo with the unexpected route. I wouldn't be surprised if some people are inspired by my premise and try it themselves.

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I may end up using Diamond as the head of the school newspaper myself. I have an arc planned for her down the line, and the school newspaper would make a great center point.

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Which reminds me, can I know how your next chapter is coming along?

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Now that I finally got the first scene just right (seriously, it gave me much more trouble than expected), the rest is coming along fast. I should have it done in a few days, then I'll need to get it edited, so hopefully it will be up by Friday.

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Do you mind sending me a PM with your first scene?

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Very interesting. :moustache: It would be great to see how things unfold later on, and in the hopes that the human 5 earn Sunset's trust back.

Nice followup to the last story. Feels like there's a bit more that can be added on, though. These kinds of ideas are presented as if only taking small samples of a glorious meal. Great, but in need of more.

When I saw the short description.

I liked it when in the show they "reformed" Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.
But this is bloody briliant!!!!

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I like writing these short stories because of their length and they don't need a whole lot of editing.

Huh I guess this is what they mean when they say poetic justice.

Those three have no one but themselves to blame. I wouldn't mind more installments to this though.

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I'd like to see others pick up on this idea and roll with it.

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You'll probably need to post it in the forums challenging/urging others to give it a try.

Imagine the Friendship Games in this verse. And SciTwi will rightly wonder if the school has really forgiven her, and so may stay at crsytal prep like in the original script

I really like this idea, it also paves a way for the CMC to get to know Diamon, and if they ever meet her ...shudders mother. They'll see why she like that, and maybe offer more support to her.

So, Ponyville Confidential, but this time around Diamond's actually wanting them to publish REAL news, instead of hurtful gossip. Hmm, interesting...

Sunset Shimmer's Time to Shine had AJ work for the school paper. That's gonna be awkward!

Well, this is shaping to be a neat storyline. I like.

You could have actually shown us what happened at the end instead of narrating it, but even so, good job!

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It's a short story. I don't really go into a lot of detail with those.

Quite a few Sunny and Diamond tiara dynamic out there, it would fit better if she were a unicorn but human version fits even better. Now let just try and get Sci-Twi and silverspoon together. :ajsmug::yay:

Meh, while it was a decent follow up it felt lacking in terms of substance,

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It's not easy to get to the same level as the original which set the bar, but since it was decent for you, I'll take the compliment.

I can't believe Sunset did this! I think I'm in love :heart:

Why do I hear that line from one of the Godfather movies “I’m gonna give him an offer he can’t refuse” when I read just the summary of this story?

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