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Nikkori


Not some cringy idol fan. Fimfiction wouldn't let me use 矢澤にこ.

Comments ( 10 )

This was short and cute , had some funny moments. The elements seemed a bit rushed choosing ponies like that. Nevertheless I enjoyed it I would consider a sequel with the new elements but make it a slower paced story. So I rate this three Chuck Testas out of five. Countinue writing my friend .

6220920 Well, I was already considering writing a few more stories tied to this one. Anyway, I will be making a sequel, one which explains how the ponies were chosen for the elements, and what Scootaloo was doing during this. But, I'm lazy sometimes, and probably won't have all of them done until late august, early September. Current project will explore how they got the elements and it's called Harmony.

Ughhh.......... I hate this ship.

And of course, thumbs down!

6238559 Why are you here then :ajbemused:

6431560 A small revenge. The author of this fic posted similar comment under this story http://www.fimfiction.net/story/96737/chasing-apples-bells-and-oranges

6221147 How is the sequel coming along anyways?

6456250 Good. I've reached 1,000 words.

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