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Woof! Weapon Of Omnipitent Force!

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This is technically a shipfic as there is shipping but I consider it more of an awkward moments friendshipfic.
Scootaloo has just turned 18 [based on Australian drinking age laws] and goes out to a local bar that night. Ordering a drink and looking a bit nervous being here without her younger friends, an older woman comes up and sits down beside her. From there the two hit it off over there with shared interests in motocross, car engines and love of The Wonderbolts.
I am completely shocked that I can't find the term 'Gildaloo' anywhere else. Trade Mark.

New Chapter every Monday and Thursday! Completed!

Based on a side/back story from Happy Anniversary Sug. Not required reading.
Proof Readers: McStuffins and The Vault Tech.

Didn't think I'd be big on the pairing of Scoots and Gilda, but it actually works really well!

- McStuffins.

P.S. there are no SFW Gilda and Scootaloo pics I swear.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 98 )

Godspeed you rebel soul

Hey look, it's a thing I said!

Expect a lawsuit within the week :trollestia:
If only I could afford a suit to go into court with...

huh first gilda x scootaloo fic i have read and it is.... Absolutely amazing!!!

I am intrigued. I must see where this ship sails.

I cannot wait for the awkward introduction to Rainbow Dash:

:scootangel:: "So... meet my girlfriend-"

:rainbowderp:: "GILDA!?"

This is pretty good, so far. Looking forward to the next part.

Lies. Granted, all but one are explicit.

Added to ye'olde read later list, will try to comment when I get back home.

I am very much intrigued~
I expect great things with a setup this unique.

good enough for a favorite good job

Why is scoots pregnant in the image?

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4872413 You're saying that jokingly but she actually is in that pic. Gilda may be easy to find a humanised version of but there aren't many oldish humanised Scootaloo pics.
Original image

Seems like a neat setup, and a pretty rare ship, i will try to follow it,

There is a tiny continuity error, when scoots hands him the ID it claims she can't be heard over the music, yet she notes twice there is no music, I recommend the simple change of, saying she couldn't be heard over some passing patrons, or the general din of the bar,

You obviously haven't read feathery equine action if you haven't heard of Gildaloo.

And by "hit it off," you mean "fuck."

Let's be clear here.

4876513 Well... I don't want to spoiler anything but... you're absolutely wrong and I'm not being sarcastic.
4874737 Thanks for that.
4875437 I haven't, and now will.

Those guys TOTALLY deserved that! Nice!

4876655 Hope you enjoy it. :3

Scootaloo looks pregnant (5-6 months maybe?) in that cover art.

Ouch! Right to the nuts!

The Hello Kitty.....

It haunt's me always....

P.S.
First line, spelled 'apartment' amusingly wrong :pinkiehappy:

In the second chapter, there was this:

This may’ve been the closest pub to where she lived, but that was still about five Ks [kilometres] away.

This apostrophe isn't needed.


I dig this story. I dig homophobic Scootaloo (because I wanna see her face when she actually falls for Gilda :twilightsmile:). You've made Gilda likable enough in this story (she has a habit of being a total dick, but you've succeeded with making her cool without taking out her Gilda-ness). Good job. Can't wait to see another chapter.

This is getting better and better :pinkiegasp:

Poor Gilda, all too realistic outcome :fluttershyouch:

Good chapter. I like how Gilda’s a bit overly-aggressive, but isn't a full-on bitch.

Awww... Come on man. Do the shipping.

Told you this wasn't a shipfic.

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THEN WHY IS THERE A ROMANCE TAG? :twilightangry2:

4902038 The same reason it has a Soarin' and Rumble tag.
We're only at chapter 3 of 10
4898699 Actually, using a comma before either 'and' or 'but' is the equivialnt of starting a new sentence, however the rule of not starting a sentence with And or But overrides this one outside of speech.
Trust me. I may not follow the all the same rules of grammar as everyone else but I heavily enforce and maintain my own ones, thus keeping constancy as a priority.
Yeah! You just got grammatically owned bitch!

4902093 I don't feel like I was just owned, so it's okay. :applejackunsure:

4902167 Nah, man. You've said something about 'ands' and 'buts' but the only thing I've pointed out was the damn apostrophe. :ajbemused:

Yay! This Gilda is awesome. Wise advice to Scoots as well. I do wonder what Scoots will think about her stormy break up with Rainbow though considering Scoots hero worship.

Really cool chapter. Still, no hangover after drinking night? :applejackunsure:

4911888 Having never had a hangover I can't relate.
I once thought I had a hangover but it turned out to just be alcohol poisoning. Good times! But seriously though, fuck tequila! [true story]
Besides I said they where drunk but not hammered. Scoots only have 3 ciders after all.
Totally not just skirting around the fact that I forgot about that part...

Nice pic
Gilda always needed a change of attitude

This made it really fast to the top of my "I really hope there is an update soon"-list ;)

I can relate to a lot about these two characters and how you write them, paleeeease continue soon :fluttershysad:

Good chapter.

I feel like this fic isn't going to be complete into we get a big, awkward reveal where Scoots introduces her 'new friend' to Rainbow and neither Gilda or RD are expecting it.

I loved the RWBY and RT jokes. Best part of this chapter :twilightsmile:

Totally not a date *wink wink*

See romance tag.

Rejoices! Let this ship sail well.

Wow, this is good.
the pic is on it's way btw

I haven't read the story yet, but I will one day, I was just wanting to point out and ask is that the scootaloo from Motherly Scootaloo? :rainbowlaugh: cause it kind of leaves me wondering if that actually happens in the story. To be honest, in my opinion, that be hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:

4952705 Yes. Yes it is.
I can't wait to get that cover art that was being made for me and get rid of that damn pregaloo :scootangel:

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