Noteworthy is waiting for his friend Caramel to come back from his trip. He�s met with shock when he finds out that Caramel is now a mare.
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KartalTheWriter
Just a kid with a selfish dream, waiting on people to be what they seem.
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Interesting, I would like to see where this goes.
Lol
Lol, I was seriously wierded out by this until the end, then it turned awesome!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
That was really funny and I enjoyed reading it, nice job. I look forward to see what happens next.
Thou knoweth my opinion already!
Still, great job!
1005495 I posted that comment on your page before I saw this. Seriously.
1005548
Awesomeee. I really want to see where this goes. Keep it up!
At first I was like 'this plot seems familiar somehow'
. Then as I kept reading I realized 'oh, it's sort of like the Little Mermaid'
! But when I reached the end I realized that that probably wasn't where you were going with this
.
In other words, I'm hooked.
1005837 Hmm, that's an interesting take on it. I can see where you'd get that idea.
:0
Surprise ending!
Suspense!
Mystery!
Keep up the good work!
-Weatherstorm
this is great. the whole time i was thinking that it wasnt caramel, then i was right. loved it.
it flowed nicely for the most part, though i was a little putoff by some of the paragraph structure, you seemed to break them into way too many miniparagraphs. anyway, ill pm you with the structure and grammar stuff.
final judgement... thumbs up!
Da buck just happened?
1404406 I'll explain that one in chapter three...don't worry, I have it all figured out.
1404411
Please do so. At first I thought magic mishap, but now....I got nothing. Maybe clone? I'm gonna guess clone.
Figured it out halfway through , loving this "fudge" character
1404430
*cough*changeling*cough*
Or a R63 Mirror Pool xD
3055406
I want to find that pool and shove Pinkie in. Just imagine: twenty different Bubble Berries screaming "FUN! FUN!"
3063894
That...would spell chaos.
And Twilight ain't dealin with that shit again!
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3064637
Or twenty different male Pinkamenas. "RUN! RUN! RUN!"
3065303
.....
That has to be one of the most evil things i've ever read.
3065710
Enjoy the nightmares.
3079289
> Implying I suffer from them now.