Just a kid with a selfish dream, waiting on people to be what they seem.
Dewdrop is a foal who’s still looking for a cutie mark. What Dewdrop finds on earning that elusive flank mark may bring the little one happiness or more sorrow.
For the second prompt of Author Support : You are a foal who's just earned a cutie mark.
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A self-insert as it’s ever been. With exaggerations, yes. Go ahead and hate it for all I care. I welcome it this time. Don’t even bother telling me why. I encourage graphic comments that barely make any sense. Go ahead and prove me wrong.
For extra points, don’t comment at all.
Not help full but the title of this reminded me of this song
and I mean nothing by the song or the lyrics.
Anyway the fic is good and I hope to see more from you.
-Belove
1258483 Yeah, somehow ALL the titles I was going through sounded like songs. I like to just think that was the mood I was in. Oh no... that's catchy...
Wow. It's like the story of my life.
Very nice, Kartal. An interesting quick read that I thoroughly enjoyed.
Wait, you want us to hate? Okay. Um... FAKE AND GAY. I am not telling you why because i is awesomes and master of the universe.
Oh wait. I want those extra points. Deleting comment. (Just kidding by the way, I really enjoyed this)
-Weatherstorm
pretty good
I see a message from you with no subject wanting an opinion about this fic that's SUPPOSED to be sad. I look at my notifications and see "New story by Kartal". I was ready to shed a tear.
In all, it was a pretty good little read, kept me interested through and through, but as I read, I was awaiting something truely heartbreaking to happen, which never came. A good read, as I said, but not something truely tear-jerking. All I see is self-pity from the foal.
And it somewhat reminds me of our RP.
Well, there's my opinion in a nutshell. Out of 10, I give it a 6.5, maybe 7.
Keep up the good work!
this has some nice feeling
the writing style is very inside of the characters head
Very good fic, I can see you put your actual emotions into dewdrop's feelings- and that makes it all the more sad!
The title reminded me of this: