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what in the actual fuck did I just read
This was twenty different types of fuck rolled up into a burrito and dipped in rainbow poop.
ARE YOU NOT ENTERTAINED?!
Best part right there!
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Can you kindly point out the errors so I can correct them? Thanks!
This was wrong on so many levels, sorry mate.
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I agree that the content is not for everyone, but there are some who enjoy it. This is why I included the appropriate warnings in the description. If you think they need to be expanded I am open to suggestions.
Thanks for commenting!
-KC
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You're a civil gentleman. I like that. Nah, this isn't for me, but I do thank you for putting in a warning. I take back my previous comment because, quite frankly, I rarely see people as polite and chill as you. And that's awesome.
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... *like*
Good carecterisation. :heart
But the story was ick.
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Thanks! I worked hard on trying to make the characters believable....at least as much as possible given the over-the-top content contained in this fic. I will work harder on the storyline in the future! What was it about the story that bugged you? Was it the lewd sexual content, or was the plot-line poorly developed (no pun intended) ?
Thanks!
-KC
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Thanks! I like that Chuck Norris gif!
The sex stuff.
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I don't know how to begin to understand this...
I'm not going to throw stones since I've written stallions having sex with tentacled plants and other weird things, but whoa I don't know what to make of this.
*nah, don't worry, didn't downvote*
LOL?
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I.....whu.... this is horrible...
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and yet I'm laughing...
I found this to be oddly hawt.
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You're grammar could use some work, though.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it!
-KC
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Ok, thanks for the suggestion. I guess I need to proof read it again!
-KC
696573 Well, you could get someone else to do it for you, or you could get something like White Smoke for help (a bit pricey, somewhat glitchy, but freaking awesome to say the least). There are websites that check your grammar for you also.
Normally, I would be all "this is blah blah," but since this made me laugh, I'll let it pass. (hey, that rhymed)
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Well, I checked it over, but I don't see anything wrong with it. This probably means I'm breaking grammatical rules that I am unaware of (or maybe I'm sleep deprived?). I will try this White Smoke program out. Thanks!
-KC
696655 Some words that should be capitalized aren't and vice versa, stuff like that. But, this is a silly fanfic, so whatever.
As much as this isn't my taste, this was good :D
I ship DiamondSpoon now :D
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it's funny because you know what dog jiz tastes like
Overall: great job! But I can't help but wonder if you were wrote this so the reader could feel like they were reading a picture book or you just made a ton of mistakes.
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Nah, I was just guessing based on what human semen tastes like! I figure we are both mammals, so any difference in taste probably comes down to diet. Perhaps I will do some research on it for my next fanfic so I don't incur the wrath of the dog semen aficionados! I'm sure someone out there on the internet has talked about how dog semen tastes. Anyway, thanks for the comment!
-KC
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I'm glad you liked it! However, I don't have any plans to write anything similar in the near future. I was going to continue on with my other fanfic and probably write something about how Pinkie Pie's foal was entered into the underground foal sex-slave business.
-KC
I... I don't know... I'm scared of what's currently happening in my pants. I need help, please, anyone...
703112 just let it happen, i find its easier to loathe yourself than to restrain yourself.
yourvery welcome. i'm not an afficianado, however... though that's an interesting fact,thanks>>701446
What the flying fucking fuck!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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To be honest. I've read the less "gentle" version of this on writing.com. I like this one a little more xD. Still, it's not really my cup of tea.
Dog sex? Erm... interesting..?
Well...
On the one hand that ritual seemed exceptionally random and oddly specific. Contrived, as they say. Not that it would be necessarily impossible, probabilistic systems make everything not physically impossible at least logically probable, but still, dogs? You'd think it would be other ponies. Or at least mules. Still, that's not to say it wasn't reasonably well-done. Uncomfortable because of the implied ages involved, and with a diminishing suspension of disbelief because of the ripping and tearing and such that didn't seem to bother her overmuch. But it's a non-serious clopfic. Things can be forgiven.
On the other hand... you have no idea how much I love stories in which Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon confess their love for one another. Even in this... admittedly odd context, they still leave together, in love. And i like that greatly.
Freaking weird...
but kinda ok^^
Does that even count as bestiality? I don't think it does but great work friend
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Thanks!
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i have the weirdest boner right now and i feel ashamed for reading this. Great job though!
wait wait... maybe i'm wrong or this isn't the one from the show but, wasn't it Diamond Tiara who had the Cutecinera?
i'm also probly the only one to like this and NOT have jacked off or something, heck i'm not even horny.
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So you are saying Silver Spoon doesn't get her own Cutecinera as well? I think she should. Especially if it involves her getting gangbanged by a bunch of dogs!
No mention of knots? I'm surprised, that's usually a beasty fan's most hallowed 'connection.' Regardless, I still gave it a thumbs-down because it's just... meh... HOT, mostly, but just okay, characterization a little weak, not that well written. Sounds more like a fantasy you scribbled out as fast as possible before you forgot it.
Also, I notice last comment was by you 5 weeks ago? Where was this before now?
I'm in the wierd part of the internet ...AGAIN?! ... Insanity is my business, so I approve this
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this error here
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Fixed! Thanks a lot!
the story says that it incomplete so will there be more chapters soon