Smacking

Vinyl Scratch's younger sister, Octavia, always smacked. All her life, Vinyl hated the sounds of loud chewing. But now that she is deaf... That is all she wants to hear.

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Harmonian

Harmonian #1 · Dec 19th, 2015 · 2 · ·

So much fucking emotions... You made me cry, sis, cry.

I LUVVED IT!

TheFanficFanPony

TheFanficFanPony #2 · Dec 19th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Interesting concept- Octie and Vinyl as sisters?

Osiris Melody

Osiris Melody #3 · Dec 19th, 2015 · 1 · ·

wow

run4thing57

run4thing57 #4 · Dec 19th, 2015 · 1 · ·

It was good.Not as sad as I thought it would be but good.

Vanilla Mocha

Vanilla Mocha #5 · Dec 20th, 2015 · · ·

6748048 Heh, thanks. ^^

6748083 Yeah. I originally got the concept from a theory of Dr. Wolf's.

6748399 Glad you liked it. ^^

WhovianPony19

WhovianPony19 #6 · Dec 20th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Omg this totally made my day\night

Vanilla Mocha

Vanilla Mocha #7 · Dec 20th, 2015 · · ·

6748820 Im glad you enjoyed it. ^-^

MagicSquirrel

MagicSquirrel #8 · Dec 20th, 2015 · 2 · ·

It makes sense. It really does. All the things you normally find annoying can be the things that you miss the most. It makes me miss my friend who just moved away. He had some really frustrating habits, and yet those are the things I miss most about him. Thank you for this story. I appreciate it.

Vanilla Mocha

Vanilla Mocha #9 · Dec 20th, 2015 · 1 · ·

6748953 You're welcome. Glad you liked it

Fome

Fome #10 · Dec 29th, 2015 · · ·

Apparently I'm the only one here square enough to not know what "smacking" is slang for. I've heard of doing smack, but this seems to be different.

Vanilla Mocha

Vanilla Mocha #11 · Dec 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

6776804 It's loud chewing with your mouth open. Normally little kids do it, since they don't know the right way to eat.

ViceCityFTW

ViceCityFTW #12 · Jan 3rd, 2016 · 3 · ·

Sighing, my mom picked it up. "Dad and I have told you, Vinyl Scratch... No listening to this for more than an hour each day. I still think that's too much... And, oh, what's this?" Turning the iPod on, she saw that the music was at 90 percent volume. "We also told you no more than 60." And "But that's too quiet!" I argued back. "My friends listen to it at 100 and they have no probl-"... But Vinyl, they might be listening to good music... Like Metal