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Fluttershy has been in a depressive state and hasn't been seen for the past few days. When a tramatic event occurs it will take all the friendship and comfort Twilight and her friends can muster to save Fluttershy from becoming an empty shell, or worse....

I am the original author of this story. This is the first fanfic I've ever written and I hope you guys enjoy it!

Comments below are greatly appreciated. I'd also like to hear about your favorite/least favorite parts in the story. If you have to ask, no I wasn't depressed when I wrote this. This was made in remembrace of my friend Nathan Maddox who commited suicide on February 12th, 2012. He shall never be forgotten.

Special thanks to MaliciousBadger on Deviant Art for his superior help in the editing process. He has helped me bring out the depth of my story into character.

Special thanks to Regidar on Deviant Art for first publishing it on FIMFiction. I have recieved so many comments that I felt the need to just post it myself.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 94 )

I read this when it was posted by Regidar, and it was fantastic.:heart: I really can't wait to see more of it. c:

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more must know of the feels i feel..
very good work,

this was posted before...:twilightangry2:

701322 But I gave Regidar permisson to post it, then I wanted to post it myself. I am the origianl author :rainbowwild:

701338.....MOAR NOW!!!!!

So sad.... and yet I can sympathize somewhat, I am sure everybody knows at least "of" someone they had ties to commuting suicide so I would not say I am so uniquely tied but I can sympathize with the 5.

And admittedly I myself have given some week trivial attempts at it myself before so I at least have a slight taste of what fluttershy is feeling...

very sweet tribute to the loss of a loved one, I salute you and give you a thumbs up

this is a great story you get the moustache award:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I'm not lying when I say that I did cry while I read the story. Because I did cry. Fluttershy is my favorite pony of the Mane 6 and to just see her take her own life like that It just hurt me deep inside. The story is definately well written and more like a sequel to the other Fluttershy fic I read a month or 2 ago. I am following this story hard, please don't leave us hanging for too long.

dude this is so freakin sad man:fluttercry:

701476 There will be more coming soon I promise. :twilightsmile:
701497 I have thought about suicide for than once but never attempted. Then I see my friend whos only 2 days older than me die of suicide. I had to write this. Thank you for your thoughts :ajsmug:
702052 I'd like to be a moustache. Thanks! :moustache:
702257 I'm sorry if its going to be a while. I work on the weekdays but I'm trying my best to get part 5 done. I won't leave you hanging! :rainbowwild:
702288 Sad I know, but just wait till the ending :pinkiegasp:

703951 My thoughts exactly. Keep this in mind until the end please. :pinkiehappy:

Could you give us an E.T.A on the next chapter?

706394 I am currently only half wat done with the draft version of part 5 :derpytongue2:. My best guess... I am pushing to have it out by Friday 6/15/12 at the latest :twilightblush:. My editor will be having finals so this could take a bit. I appraciate your patience :moustache:

701001 Well, I'm GLaD you got the chance to see it from me before this guy comes and steals all the glory. The nerve of him. Just because he wrote it, he thinks he's better then me?
Oh, wait...

714008 *sigh* What was that you said? :twilightangry2: Are you calling me a thief? I gave you permission and then I wanted my own page to post. How dare you! :flutterrage:

Its all good... but I was intending on steal all the glory for myself! :twilightsmile:

:twilightoops: hold on, did u delete the first chapter?

Um...where's the first chapter? It kinda disappeared.

715439 Well never fear, I have chapter 1 at my version, which I uploaded before Neutral had the time to. Click here:http://www.fimfiction.net/story/29850/1/Would-Anypony-Miss-Me%3F/Would-Anypony-miss-me%3F
715603 Well never fear, I have chapter 1 at my version, which I uploaded before Neutral had the time to. Click here:http://www.fimfiction.net/story/29850/1/Would-Anypony-Miss-Me%3F/Would-Anypony-miss-me%3F

715439 So sorry. I was doing a little editing and forgot to republish it. Its done! :pinkiehappy:

715603 So sorry. I was doing a little editing and forgot to republish it. Its done! :pinkiehappy:

716403 Thanks for the shout out. More coming within a week. :pinkiecrazy:

Wow... imagining Fluttershy like this is hard. I mean she's always been so innocent on the show and now shes saying these things that make her seem so different :fluttershysad:

716852
You're very welcome :pinkiehappy: I'm loving this story, and I can sympathise for you. I had a friend take his life earlier this year. Granted we barely talked, but that kinda thing has an effect on everyone you know? Keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

Ooooooooh buck, another wonderful chapter. Can't wait to see what happens when the inevitable showdown between the Mane 6 and Trixie takes place.

this is a really awesome story despite what happened to fluttershy:fluttercry: I understand how she must have felt after killing that wolf while she also cares so deeply fro every animal. but she did save angel's life as a result. after reading this chapter I see that what Trixie said to her must have been the final nail in the coffin so to speak because fluttershy was already contemplating suicide and was having some doubts before meeting her, but after Trixie said what she did it removed all doubt. if fluttershy didn't see trixie then I believe that she would have waited a little bit longer to attempt her suicide and twilight would have gotten to her before she even tried.

I loved that brief moment at the end with Trixie. Can't wait to see what she's going to do with this knowledge, especially since she has more information than any of the mane cast, save Fluttershy.

753245 Thats exactly the plot that I was trying to convey. Sad, I know. Sometimes there is either a relieving point or a breaking point when someone is having suicidal thoughts. If Trixie hadn't talked to Fluttershy, she might have been able to see Twilight. True that she did save Angel, but where is he? Hope youll stay for the next chapter! :twilightblush:

761422 I love to leave a cliffhanger/twist at the end of each chapter. Find out later what happens with Trixie if anything :trixieshiftright:

I think we need to get Angel some Wile E. Coyote signs to make speech go faster :)
And Spike can be kinda scary when he wants to be for such a little dragon.

damn cliffhangers.... I need to know what happens :fluttershyouch:

865413 Yeah, for most of the time, Angel will need one of those "screw ball" signs just to hold up randomly and Spike know how to breath FIRE. Need I say more? Thanks for reading!

866312 It's so strange. Everypony keeps saying that. :pinkiehappy:

866903HOW ARE YOU NOT IN THE FEATURED STORIES?!?!?!?!?AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!:flutterrage:

867735 There is conflict with your comment. What featured stories do you mean? :derpyderp2:

867939You know those really ,really good stories on this site in the top right corner .I guess you gotta get more views or somthing......:trixieshiftleft:

I'm happy this story is getting updated. :pinkiehappy:

Know what would've been even more threatening for Spike to say?

"You just remember ... I chew up gems ... Pony bones are nothing."

930054 Damn, I guess that would sound a bit more... F'd up to day, but oh so true. I just can't see Spike being a cannabal though. Thanks for reading :rainbowwild:

My god Ch 6:fluttercry::fluttercry: and another thing how can Fluttershy say nopony would miss her

:pinkiesad2: I would miss her

:applecry::fluttercry::raritycry::pinkiesad2: this is so sad and entransing, and my condolances on your friend

967896 Thank you. He was a good person and there were more than a few hundred people at his funeral. I had to write something like this. More on the way soon. Thanks for reading up till this point :twilightsmile:

I like this picture alot more then the other one, less creepy. :pinkiehappy:

1018139 Me too. That other one was made by my editior and was then used by Regidar when I first gave him permission to uploiad it. If you've been reading, I thank you!

What a Fantastic way to end such an emotional tale.This was AMAZING!
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

DAYUMN! That was an awesome story. Points for awesomeness. But am I ever so glad the emotional rollercoaster finally dropped me off.

1116860 I'm glad you enjoyed it. It took a lot to finish but, with Malicious Badger's help, we were able to pull it off. Thanks for reading! :twilightsmile:
1116912 I try my best to make it emotional, so I'm glad you loved the ride. :pinkiehappy:

This story was fantastic. Thank you for your good work.

Wow this was amazing. Read the whole thing in one sitting,

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