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Poor Apple Bloom I hope she isn't too scared by Yang when it is all said and done.
Beg for mercy, it won't help,
Embrace the ending you were dealt!
Seems you ponies just won't learn,
Now sit back and watch me burn!
Whoa Culus is one filthy jerk and deserve the beating that will come.
Though Yang much really show some restraint, Apple Bloom is completely terrified of her and she must show her she isn't just a merciless killer.
7449926 EPIC Quote, is EPIC!!!!!!!!
No!! You stole my idea....
It might be better then if I wrote it...
Time to watch ze show!
I'm fine with where this is going as long as she doesn't kill them. I think that would be a huge mistake from a narrative perspective.
Good to see you back and writing, though!
Culus just made his biggest mistake ever...
R.I.P. Culus
7450408 That means Rest In Prison, right?
Hopefully Yang will have the restraint to not kill Culus, killing him would be detrimental to both Apple Bloom's and her own mental health.
7450565 Implying that Yang will spare Culus and turn him in. Yeah... No.
Welp... R.I.P. Culus
either there is some magic that would be involved to give culus an edge or he would be in worse shape than junior after that one night....
KO awesome chapter, Yang is all ready to go to show this jerk of a pony what happens when you mess with her and her hair.
Finally Cullus gets what he deserves, and the rest of Team RWBY gets show off their story arcs before a possible reunion.
Looking forward to the comeuppance. .....and Ruby.
Oh, this is going to be fun...
Looks like Yang will get her revenge but hopefully she just injury the idiot so Applebloom won't be scarred for life about Yang absolutely beats this idiot to ashes.
She'll burn now to watch the fire grow.
7450565 Or 'rot'. But I'd be surprised if he didn't have to make a trip to the intensive care ward first.
Mate this is by far the greatest thing i've read in years (well besides jam) keep on rockin' dude!
Um, why the hell not? They chain you up like an animal and beat you mercilessly and you DON'T want to kill them? If it was me and I got lose, I'd slaughter every single one in the camp. They NEED to die.
*reads to the end of the chapter* Good. Now kill them all.
Okay, so I'm at least glad that he's aware of how close they are to everything going completely wrong for them.
Apparently he already worked out that the manticores were slaughtered by Yang, but how did he still come to the conclusion that her weapons were used to kill Sunburst? What is his body like?
I still don’t follow his thought process with Apple Bloom. Seemed poorly thought out on his part.