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I'd say you did a very reasonable job on how much Aura would heal black, in what is at least a day along with medical aid, even if very minor in the end. One way I see to look at how much Aura can heal is to look at the abuse it can take before it breaks. Since Aura is preventing physical harm even if not pain while it is active it is within reason to say that almost any injury one would receive while their aura is still up is instantly healed. Now while healing is basically instant for injuries occurring with an intact aura it would be expected that injuries, while the aura is broken, would take longer without a massive surge of aura just as Jaune's semblance can do to boost someone's aura to heal them as you pointed out or boost the strength of another's semblance as we saw with Ren.
Am I the only one that sees the irony in that statement?
Aura is never really completely flushed out in its details in RWBY, so I think your guess is as good as anyone's on how fast it recovers, and how fast it can heal injuries. And I think Fluttershy in this chapter was written well.
Will any other RWBY characters appear in this story?
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For now, only team RWBY will be in the main story. Other characters will be relegated to the "What Comes After" interludes.
Well it is good to see Blake being taken care of. So far she had the better reception. I hope all will go well once all the girls meet back up.
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i agree, plus weiss's aura would have been either shattered or heavily drained from the fight they were in, while blakes would have started to come back while she rested
A calm chapter for our tired Faunus.
And so far, your depiction of Fluttershy's personality is good.
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We have yet to get to Ruby so I would assume yes.
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LOL I spent days writing that, and you responded in about a minute. I didn't even realize you were online.
I guess can only nod along to your explanation, since it makes much sense. And kind of laughing at how you didn't make a big deal about it. I suppose I'm able to feel happy about this because you talk about being depressed in the past tense.
Tangent time! This is arguable. When Weiss was impaled it was a lower to the right shot. I actually studied it for a bit cause that week was absolute dread. It entered short of the spine, which that mid section of the body, holds nothing vital but the spine. Where it exited is where the liver is. And that is actually something you can live with only half of, or even without (albeit a more difficult life) naturally when you have your body pushed through like that it can be damaging as hell, but she was lucky all things considered. Only reason she was really set to die was this combined with all the previous battle fatigue and pain she suffered. Body can only take so much.
As for dear Blake here, way you describe it is above the hip, fleshy bit of your side while not more lethal a place to be hit then you chest cavity, that is dangerously close to being extremely cruel. Your intestines, Stomach, and Kidneys are all there. If the stomach bursts, oof, your as good as gone, and it’s not short. Intestines are much easier to get away with, ideally they aren’t full, but same threat as the stomach. Kidneys... just don’t lose both. The dangerous thing here, is all those injuries can lead to quick blood poisoning, and that will absolutely murder you.
Oh shit, that was the last chapter... well it’s pretty alright. Most my complaints are about the writing and not the story, so that’s good. And i mean, i want to see where it goes. I’ll track it for sure. Have a thumbs up too.
I bet nothing, because im pretty sure the show has probably ended by now, and you havent posted a single chapter since this one
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In Qrow's defense, there is still another season coming in a few months. Therefor, there's still time.
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In Qrow's offense, im pretty sure they were talking about mlp, not RWBY
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Well if he was, then yeah. Not a chance of this finishing before the end of MLP.
I like the story so far. I'm not so sure that ponies don't have aura considering Twilight
took an anvil to the Head from terminal velocity. We've seen pinkie pie and many of the other ponies thrown into walls and rainbow crashing into buildings and being just fine.
I understand the ponies not having aura is part of your story so I don't mind I just think that the ponies in the story are a little bit too weak compared to the show.
I know this hasnt been updated in awhile, but in case you see this...I really liked it. I had an itching to read a RWBY and MLP crossover and found this one. Gave it a shot and I dig it
I hope you continue, but if not...thanks for whats here.
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“Run through” can make sense, although “being run through” is just sloppy, and it threw me off.
(Sorry for late response)
So is there any progress you can report on for the next chapter?
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At the moment, no. Nothing beyond trying to come up with some semblance of a plan on where to go from here.
i hope more is made this is my most favorite fic