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This... Is gonna get intense...
JNPR and CRDL working together? This should be interesting…
Tell the story at your own pace, the one that makes the most sense to you and what you believe to be the readers.
This was a change of pace for this story, and I can enjoy that!
This should be fun. And by fun I mean really interesting for us to read.
Whatever I really do like it
KO awesome chapter, Team JNPR and CRDL working together that's going to led them to some troubling time on their mission and hopefully find some clues as well.
I see no real drop in quality from the previous chapters. There was just this one odd bit of dialogue from Jaune:
Not sure what the "it" is referring to.
Well let's see how this goes. Never be afraid to diverge from canon if it suits your story, make it your own.
I would be a terrible reader if I didn't think your side story wouldn't connect somehow to the main story, I trust you as a writer to know more than the reader.
Yeah the season 3 final sure did a number on everyone, but you find a way to bounce back and arrange the story so it fits you and us.
As for standards and quality, don't worry it's actually really good. Didn't find an "a" or "an" misused. Only this two mistake below.
the White Fang is active
either nothing or "over"
This... is only worth a frowny face.
I am incredibly disappointed by the lack of correction from Oobleck. "It's Doctor Oobleck. I didn't earn my PHD for fun."
Too little too late.
Oh PLEASE let Cardin get killed.
7655448 He seems like he's turned over a new leaf in this story. Then again, I know people that have lied about that before.
7655316 Yes, Vol 3 did indeed do number on all of us, Pyrrha's Death Hit us all hard and the teams being broken up.....it was a nightmare.
Makes sense for Ozpin to send JNPR and CRDL, RWBY could handle the amount of Grimm but it would take two for anyone else.
Why was Ren trying to black Nora from CRDL's view? is he just worried about her or trying to keep her from breaking some legs?
This was just fine, Qrow. To be honest I was starting to wonder about what was going on with the rest of the kingdoms.
7655432
Was that a running pun in series? Because you have to be PhD to get Professor position... so sounds like a silly preference.
*head to desk*
OoooOoOoh... reading almost word for word the script of an episode hurts a bit...
Ahhhh...