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BlandPony


"Start writing, no matter what. The water does not flow until the faucet is turned on." - Louis L'Amour

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Fluttershy wakes up one morning to find Spike cuddled up next to her in her bed.

This makes her wonder: what happened last night?


This is my first fanfiction, I hope you like it!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 29 )

Way to help a friend in need Spike, but you're about to be blindsided by a first class misunderstanding. You should know by now that walking up that good has a double edge.

Good story, i enjoyed it.

Lol missunderstandings are the worst. Great job for your first fan fic btw. :twilightsmile:

Nice prank.

:raritycry: FLUTTERSHY!

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:raritycry:SPIKEY I THOUGHT WE'RE SPECIAL!:raritydespair:


:twilightangry2: YOU HAVE SOME EXPLANING TO DO!

:yay: THIS WAS SO CUTE!

Great concept, poor execution. Get some practice on your grammar, you'll find more people willing to read your future stuff.

Man. Cant imagine Twilghts furry when Spike gets back

6621277 I can! Twilight's always furry! :pinkiehappy:

6621809 SPELLCHECK:twilightsmile:its fury.:twilightangry2:

Twilight dropped the letter, shocked. Oh, once that little dragon gets home, he's gonna get it.
This made me laugh for 5 minutes straight!

6619314 R.I.P Rarity - Reason for death: Spike likes Fluttershy, NOT ME!!!!

that ending. oh, spike and the town isn't ready for that.

Nice story. I enjoyed reading it.

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Maybe.

(That could be a great idea for a clopfic!)

6622338 Isn't it a beautiful sight, bro.

6622493 i wouldn't mind reading about that sight

6622543 I just love how Spike shipping and general awesomeness has become a thing over the past year or so. I remember back in the day when i first started writing, it was like... nonexistant.

6622545 and now looks at you. 700+ stalkers, almost 20 stories, headed a few panels, and part of a huge reviewing group. you are living the writing life man.

Good job! A great first story. :heart:

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It's not perfect. I spotted a few punctuation problems and a case of your/you're confusion but it doesn't detract much from the story.

Haha, funny. Thumbs up!

Sequel plz

This was funny, sequel?

Dear Twilight,
I would just like to let you know that Spike and I slept together last night. I hope you understand, he just wanted to spend the night with me.
-FS

:facehoof: Yep, that didn't sound right.

:twilightangry2::Spike! You were supposed to have a tickle fight with ME last night!

I actually thought that, for the first half of the story, that Spike gave a massage.

the end made me laugh so hard, i fell to the ground! keep up the good work!

I know what happened. They did the thing, i think its just spike not tellling what "Really" happened. It was never explained why Spike was blushing.:ajsmug:

If I had a glass of water I would have spit out, great laugh.

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