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Shpoople96

Shpoople96 #1 · Nov 15th, 2015 · · ·

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Zurvan

Zurvan #2 · Nov 15th, 2015 · 3 · ·

I wonder how my Shiny is doing with Sweetie Belle and Spike She thought. My guess is pretty sweet. She softly giggled to herself.

Please tell me you're writing a story for this.

Mr Ghostman

Mr Ghostman #3 · Nov 15th, 2015 · · ·

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Maybe? Maybe not.

Kinda

Zurvan

Zurvan #4 · Nov 15th, 2015 · · ·

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Pinkie will be happy if you do and sad if you don't. You don't want a sad Pinkie do you?

Mr Ghostman

Mr Ghostman #5 · Nov 15th, 2015 · · ·

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Why? I'll never make Pinkie Winkie Saddy Waddy!

Although on the other hand I do have a Prince Blueblood/Diamond Tiara tsundere fetish-y foalcon clopfic in the works

Zurvan

Zurvan #6 · Nov 15th, 2015 · · ·

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I like the way you think. (Pulls out a chair and some popcorn)

PolishValsion

PolishValsion #7 · Nov 15th, 2015 · · ·

Please tell me you're still gonna make that story about dominating Diamond Tiara that you've mentioned a few days ago...

Mr Ghostman

Mr Ghostman #8 · Nov 15th, 2015 · · ·

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Trust me. I will very soon.

triq267

triq267 #9 · Nov 15th, 2015 · · ·

Well, I loved the story. This was something that needed to be out there, which now is. Plus now I'm gonna be thinking about Dinky's hooves all day, so I guess there's that.

One thing I noticed though was that there were more punctuation and grammatical errors than in your last few stories. If you have an editor, you might want to find a new one. The issues that are there don't make-or-break the story, but they definitely took me out of it a couple of times. Just something to think about.

Mr Ghostman

Mr Ghostman #10 · Nov 15th, 2015 · · ·

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I see. Thanks for the feedback. That might have explained why this story didn't so that well compared to Dinky's New Friend.

Teeemu

Teeemu #11 · Nov 16th, 2015 · 2 · ·

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Oh yes there's a definite growing trend in number of stories downvoted due to shear grammar. I myself am a bit of a grammar stickler.
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"Dinky and Frankie became more than just friends." I cant repeat enough how this sort of thing takes away from something that needs to be as immersive as clop.

Besides that I enjoyed this story!