Big Mac decides it's high time he went courting. Working on the Pie farm seems like a fine way to prove his worth and get to know Marble and her family. She's a pretty, demure little mare and she seems to like him. He does not foresee any major obstacles.
He did not foresee Limestone Pie.
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Seems pretty cute so far and the characterizations are pretty spot-on as far as I can tell. I'll be keeping an eye on this one ^_^
This is too cute and honestly, I feel like you put a lot of thought into this. Of course, any good piece of writing isn't doNE without thoughtfulness, but this was written well and the part about thE farm's net worth was fascinating and believeable, and as someone who is absolutely terrible at math and clueless about business, I was really impressed.
Upvoted and favorited! I'm excited for more!
Aside from Applejack being one word instead of two, I have no criticisms. Only admiration.
Nice zinger with the net worth.
I swear this ship sails itself...
Was that a happy 'Mmm-hm' or flirty 'Mmm-hm'?
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Oops, I'll go fix that. And thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it!
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Thank you so much! I do try to put in little details, so it's nice to see them get noticed.
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I'm glad you liked it so far! I hope you enjoy the rest, too.
This story looks to be amazing! Going to fav, track and follow.
Keep up with the work!
Well... I have to give this story its first downvote. It just wasn't my style.
P.S. I'm totally being a troll, don't worry. Awesome story. Can't believe how many shipfics there are of this ship now.
HOW does this ship feel more natural than either fluttermac or cherriimac? "shrug"
followed
Go on...
I eagerly await the next chapter.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
After all, it's like the say... well, I'll just let my little friend here say it.
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This sounds very good so far.I can't wait to read more.
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That was a "aw, hell yeah," mm-hmm.
More!!!!!!!!!!!!
Um, if that's okay with you. I guess...
More please!!! I need to know what us gonna happend next
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I definitely plan to continue!
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Oh, well, good.
We thirst for more!
Good chapter.
As someone who's had to fight for the approval of their brother-in-law, and their father-in-law... even their mother-in-law, come to think of it, I can fully understand what this is like. I can only hope to see another chapter in the future, hopefully one that is just a entertaining as this one was.
Limestone really wanted to make sure Big Mac would be good for Marble. Keep up the good work.
Oh I can't wait for more to come
I loved the back and forth after Limestone shouted 'Alright, Alright. Enough already.'
Cannot wait for ch. 3. Maybe Big Mac and Marble will conversate at last...
More.... Please more...
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So, um, that's an ending.
I mean, it's a complete lack of one, but it says complete, so I guess it's an ending.
One of the best stories I have ever read!
It can't end like this... Mange the will be a sequel
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What a captivating chapter. Such vivid imagery! And so imaginative, I would have never thought of the crystas acting as instruments themselves. I love it.
It just goes to show that you don't need a high word count to write something completely and utterly compelling.
Excuse me while I go melt over there.
This is complete? Aww, that's sad. I feel like there's so much more for it, he's still got some trials and tribulations to overcome. He's still courting her, they have so much more to tell.
But I did enjoy this, and I'm glad you updated. I hope you write more in the future.
Mac went a courting and he did ride, a sword and a pistol by his side.
Wow...the Apples are loaded! Who'd a thunk it? Of course, it takes a lot of bits to run a farm, and so much earned has to be sent right back out, but it sounds like they're doing all right for themselves.
I like Marbletosh. I know Sugarmac is canon now, but I really wish they'd gone with this one, if only to see Pinkie's family more often.
Sweet story so far!