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bahatumay


Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.

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Rainbow has always said that she'd go anywhere with Applejack. This promise has led her to the Pies' rock farm as Applejack and the rest of the family go to support Macintosh during the Choosing Stone Ceremony.

But of course, there's more than just watching going on. On the rock farm, there's time to just... talk.


More of an experiment in dialogue-heavy chapters than anything else.
Written for AppleDash Contest 4 (family, a place outside of Ponyville).

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

“Dinner’s ready!” Limestone yelled, banging her pickaxe against a rock in a crude imitation of a dinner triangle. “Stop mackin’ on each other and get your lazy tails over here!”
“Coming, mother!” Rainbow blurted before she could stop herself.

LMAO XDD I cant totally imagine that:rainbowlaugh:

A small, quick, cute, fluffy story! Very nice. :pinkiesmile: The Like was earned from the second chapter at the moment of the roll.

This was quite good.

Not bad at all.

Also, the dialogue heavy bits worked quite well.

~Skeeter The Lurker

And judgement is pending...

~Skeeter The Lurker

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The first thing that came to mind was, 'You have been weighed. You have been measured.' Let's see if I am found wanting. :rainbowlaugh:

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Excellent... Gotta keep y'all on your toes!

~Skeeter The Lurker

A cute little pairing that I greatly enjoyed.

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