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You do atmospheric horror rather well, I have to say.
Only critique would be that you should do something to make the mystery dialogue at the end a little clearer that it's actually being spoken/heard and not part of the narration. Good stuff otherwise.
7499049 Wow, thanks!
How the heck did you dig up this story?
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I was doing a little library cleanup and have Room To Grow listed as a underrated story on my userpage. I decided to see what else you had done and this was a nice, short read that I was in the mood for.
I really, really hope you're able to get back to Room To Grow at some point, that story was just all kinds of awesome so far and I absolutely loved the atmosphere and lingering dread you had built up.
7500491 I sort of got behind on that one, since it seemed so few people were reading it. The thing is the next few chapters seemed so underwhelming when I went back to edit them, and I didn't know how to bring it from there to the ending in an interesting way. But now that you've said something I'll give it another look. Thanks so much. It's nice to hear something after all this time.
This is super cool :O I didn't get to feel much of the horror through my dehydration headache, but I still got the creeps a little. I feel like a little bit more could have been explained, tantalizing hooks to pull you in just a bit more, since it's a bit... detached? I think, as it is right now.