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That's some good writing you got there.
Be a shame if someone... Up voted it.
Yus
Boy that is some good clop
Been a while hasn't it?
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Last time I wrote some vanilla lesbian sex was about a year ago. So yeah, I guess it has been.
Quiet good....Interesting choice of Sunset costume...normally i like irony and have her wear a devil outfit but that worked just as well.
I approve.
loved it, sequel it...Sunset really can be shipped with anyone. xD Please to Sunset and Adagio or Sunset & Fluttershy next
This... this is something I've been waiting a while for. Loved it! Keep making awesome stuff like this, please!
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And you! Can I get a link to your avatar picture? I adore it.
~SolidFire
7139949 PM me
http://dm29.deviantart.com/art/Twiliet-Sparkling-395257457
what? no sci twi as Juliet Starling awww
I was expecting some camp and maybe some cheap clop. I was NOT expecting an absolutely excellent saddle ripper!
4/5 stars, losses one for needing more
finally, some outstanding Sundash! This ship needs more!
mm.. amazing!
Good little read.
Though you really used their names heavily during the encounter. I know that when writing interaction between two characters (particularly with same gender pronouns) it can be hard to keep the characters actions separate without using names, but there was so much of it going back and forth it got a bit distracting for me. Maybe it's just me though.
Did enjoy it in any case. Keep 'em comin'.
I'll say this I haven't read Just Exploring and after reading this I need to. But overall this was a great story, you really bring the characters to life and give them enough emotion and thought. That it almost seems like I'm there. Keep up the great work, and I hope to read more of your great pieces in the years to come.
All I can say is; Holy Shazzbot! I never really came across such a pairing before, (Sunset X Rainbow Dash) but you have managed to mix a beautiful blend of drama and hot, lesbian action into a well made blend.
You, Sir and/or Madame, have my respect.
well, I'm sure as hell not a critic, and honestly, I loved Just Experimenting (and reread it from time to time), but it didn't seem like this was too noticeably different (in terms of writing). Maybe I need to reread it (JE) again.
Regardless though, this was damn good.
Moar! Write more like this!
Like,I don't know, maybe role play
Oh, hey! This was one of the Fics that made me realize that there are such things as good clopfics! And with it being almost Halloween, I felt it would be fitting to read it again. I must say, this is one of the best Fics Ever!...
Of all time!
The story is simple: Halloween was another thing that Rainbow Dash was the best at, and someone beat her at all. In this case, it was Sunset Shimmer when she was dressing up for Halloween for the first time. At the same time, Sunset has gained a crush on RD. Due to the fact that Sunset's getting more compliments, Rainbow gets mad at her. Sunset thinks that Rainbow no longer cares about her in any way, shape, or form; so Rarity decides to tell Rainbow Dash about Sunset's crush on her. In the end, Rainbow Dash apologizes, they f*ck, and they seem to fall in love...
This needs a sequel! I Demand For One!!!
Yay
Still gonna read twidash but well this one was amazing I loved it