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InTheStands


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Oof, sex while sick,eh? Hee hee hee.

Not bad a story. Let's see where this goes.

Edit: Also,FIRST BITCHEZ

Will she get sick as a result? 10/10:heart:

Your the first person to upload a good sex scene with Cadence in it.

Hey! This is pretty well written! Good for you. Will track for some more.:yay:

Totally going to read this one later. Sounds definitely interesting :rainbowkiss: Though I often prefer to wait until the whole story is finished... I would get too confused with many incomplete stories :twilightblush:

I actually read that having sex while sick is the worst treatment methods, since it exhausts you and makes your body devote resources away from fighting any diseases you have.

Nice story by the way.

12 out of 15 Yogstars...from me to you... :twilightsmile:

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Really?
...Oops:twilightblush:
But let's be honest...is either one of them complaining? At the moment, at least?
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Well, thank you! :pinkiesmile:

Cough, sex, sneeze, sex, REPEAT. lol

Nice job on this clopfic.

The uterus does not surround the penis during sex. If it did, it would be extremely painful to the female.. and probably both parties in actuality. Get your anatomy correct. Honestly, its too easy to make a joke about this. So I leave you with Rainbowdash laughing.. :rainbowlaugh:

Other than that one thing, its a solid clopfic.

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Ah. Terribly sorry about that. I'll get that fixed, don't worry. Thank you very much for pointing that out.:raritywink:

not bad.. but why did u not go with the shinning refusing oral from Cadance and vice versa :rainbow huh: if i was shinning i WOULD kill for her to give me head... but well written love it all the way:twilightsmile:

691765 As stated in Chapter one, Shining didn't think much of Fellating at all, plus, it's the writers clopfic, and he can write whatever he wants

FINALLY SOMEONE WHO WRITES THE TWO WELL

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Really? You took the time to point out a plot hole (the not fun kind) in a clopfic? That's kinda sad, man.

Wow, not bad at all! Well-written, all things considered, and I enjoyed reading it :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for writing this.

Awesome :pinkiehappy:
1 thing though...Cadence not Cadance
Not to be one of those spelling fags but.. yeah I'm a bit of a spelling fag.:pinkiecrazy:

This reminds me of another clopfic with a similar premise, but with Twilight Velvet and Night Light. :pinkiegasp:

5136164 what was the name of that story

5836405 The fic is literally called Mother's Day.

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