not bad.. but why did u not go with the shinning refusing oral from Cadance and vice versa :rainbow huh: if i was shinning i WOULD kill for her to give me head... but well written love it all the way

691765 As stated in Chapter one, Shining didn't think much of Fellating at all, plus, it's the writers clopfic, and he can write whatever he wants

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Really? You took the time to point out a plot hole (the not fun kind) in a clopfic? That's kinda sad, man.

Sexy.

5836405 The fic is literally called Mother's Day.

5836415 thank you