You and Rarity have been dating for a several months, do you have what it takes to confess your feelings for the beautiful unicorn?
Hey, this is Advance, I am new to writing fanfics so please add any constructive criticism when reviewing my stories.
You and Rarity have been dating for a several months, do you have what it takes to confess your feelings for the beautiful unicorn?
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Comedy. Gold.
Oh, for Celestia's sake...
"How about... you bend over instead dear?" you suggest.
Very good read
Oh my
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. . . . I'm usually more eloquent, but in this case. ME GUSTA!
is it just me or do i sense a MLP-Genesis reference somewhere in here
I was with you until she said bend over. Ow.
OH FUCK!
gusta, very shexy
andyways, ehere's my read of this
http://youtu.be/3kv_cM7VQiQ
Those final two words made this all worth it.
Sweet...
Major wut at the end
shes telling HIM to bend over
BITCH PLEASE
but either way it was good just the first person thing was not required
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Thanks for the comments everyone! Sorry if I couldn't reply to your comments individually, I haven't had much time on my hands recently.
But wow! 350 views? That's more than I ever would've expected! Once again, thanks for reading my story!
840916It's Cool, no problem... ;)
840916 Hey! You wrote a good story.
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Eh, man. You gonna finish Invisible Relationship anytime soon? Maybe? Please?
o_o ... WHAT~?
Wha- but, how? With her horn?
I'm not sure I want to know...
That ending earns a .
I got that joke.
How?
There's a thing called knowyourmeme.
Look it up.
That ending made it lolololol...
Oh my celestia