The Honeymoon Sweet

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iamli3

iamli3 #1 · Mar 30th, 2013 · 2 · 14 ·

so just another plain clop fic then?....

Shadow Star

Shadow Star #2 · Mar 30th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Pretty good, could be better. B-

Insidiaphilia

Insidiaphilia #3 · Mar 31st, 2013 · · ·

Amazed no one else thought of these...

TallyHo

TallyHo #4 · Apr 1st, 2013 · 1 · ·

2344379

Raw is better.
I prefer my clop without 800 chapters of mysterious filler and complex plot lines you need a diagram to understand.

iamli3

iamli3 #5 · Apr 1st, 2013 · · ·

2353365 i suppose i've been enough of both to not care so much , i guess , frick my mental state is diminished right now....

Comment posted by Insidiaphilia deleted Apr 2nd, 2013

Poptard

Poptard #7 · Apr 2nd, 2013 · 2 · ·

Well, I liked it. Even among other crazy sex stories, some heartwarming clopstories, even if they are vanilla, do the mind good.

DoctorQuill

DoctorQuill #8 · May 3rd, 2013 · 5 · ·

Awesome. Short sweet and with nothing kinky. This is exactly what we need more of, the consentual bonding of two ponies who do actually love each other, instead of just bangin cuz dey can.

ResearcherBrony

ResearcherBrony #9 · May 10th, 2013 · 2 · ·

Am I the only one who thought that it may have been kind nasty for them to sleep in a bed covered with there bodily fluids? All in all, very sentimental and nice fic.

CarcinoGeneticist

CarcinoGeneticist #10 · May 14th, 2013 · 14 · 1 ·

D'awwww, this one's just straight up adorable, sweet n' sexy lovemaking, and it's perfect. I do have such a soft spot for canon couples and happy sweet loving married sex. There really need to be more fics like it. It was/is certainly a motivating factor for me in writing about Twilight and Shiny's parents.

Looking forward to more stories from you, good sir, you've definitely caught my eye.

--CG

RoyalBardofCanterlot

RoyalBardofCanterlot #11 · Mar 10th, 2018 · · ·

"Cadence laughed again, then her face drew in. “Just… just go slowly, at first. I’ve never done this before.”

Shining sat back. “Want to know a secret?”

“Hm?”

“Neither have I.”

Cadence’s eyebrows rose. “Really?” She tilted her head uncertainly.

“Really.” Shining Armor rubbed a hoof on her belly with a small smile. “By the time I was old enough to start caring about mares, I’d enlisted in the guard. There’s not a whole lot of free time in the lower ranks. By the time I made Captain, I had more leeway, but… by then, I’d met you.”

“Oh,” she whispered. “Shiny…”

“You were the one I wanted, Cadence,” he said, brushing her cheek. “And if I had to wait a while for you, it was a sacrifice I was willing to make.”

Her eyes glistened. “I love you, Shining Armor.”

He closed his eyes and kissed her deeply. “And I love you,Mi Amore Cadenza.”

She pulled him closer. “Please, Shiny. Let’s make each other happy.”

“You’ve already done that,” he said, smiling.

He looked down between them, and with a hoof, he guided himself into her. He pushed forward gently, breathing in sharply as he felt the warmth of her around him. Cadence moaned at his entrance, her wings curling up to hug him.

Shining Armor slid further in, trying desperately to maintain control. He moved forward, giving a low groan at the feel of her damp heat. His tip bumped into a wall of resistance. Cadence’s eyes went wide.

“Ready?” he asked. She nodded wordlessly. “Okay, on three. One… two…” He thrust suddenly, catching her by surprise, which would hopefully lessen the pain. She gasped anyway, and winced."

This part is what makes this story great. How Shining is going gently for Cadence, making sure she's ready. Really shows his love for her.

LunaJack