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NeonEclipse


20 years old. Loves mlp fanfiction of all types(mostly shipping).

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Wait.. Shining Armor's having sex with Cadence instead of Twilight? WHAT MADNESS HAVE YOU WROUGHT UPON THE WORLD?

1686543 well, that IS her husband and-WAIT WHAT :twilightoops:

1686543
......Wait...
I saw you...you were just...What happened to...
:derpytongue2:
Never mind...

1686561>>1686565 Y'all heard me. :moustache:

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:eeyup: Though I wish I hadn't...

This was...what's the right word? ah, yes: passionate and genuine. Props to you :twilightsmile:

1686543 You need your head checked, man.

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Madness? THIS...IS...PONY!!! *kicks you in a giant bottomless pit* :flutterrage:

This was not clop... it is something much better.
It is an erotic story of love, and it was beautifully done.

Instant fave!

Nicely done. Not entirely just clop, but passionate and in-depth love.

1686853 Agreed whole-heatedly.

I absolutely enjoyed this one.

1689409 Sum 41 kicks ass.

1689433 I just saw them 2 weeks ago. I got my glasses smashed...so worth it.

1689884 I live in hawaii so all we get are reggae shows. :twilightangry2:
It's hard to be a rock fan here.

And now I cant stand up because of too little bloodflow. Oh and I came. Hard. Really Hard. I hope I have a stepladder or Im going to have to explain the mess on the ceiling.

1689896 Ahhhhhh my sympathies. Don't conform!

1690250 Well, you know. There's currently one in the featured box.


1690255 It's... tragic.

1686543 Regidar, go home, you're drunk.

On the story itself, I've put it on my read later list. It's going to be nice reading some tender, passionate, non-fetish stuff with a canonical couple.

1690272 At least you don't have snow, my hands are so cold I can barely type this :S

1690274 NOT EVEN SLIGHTY

1690291 I love snow. I live in the wrong fucking place.

1690303 Correction: I like snow, but hate the cold. Just cause I have poor circulation in my hands and feet so they get cold easy. Wanna switch places for a few months? lol

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Not every clop has to employ strange fetishes and uncommon pairings to be enjoyable. Just a mare and a stallion wanting to make a child together is more than enough to write a passionate and lust-filled story over, and is simple and beautiful in its own right. :twilightsmile:

I do plan on other stories but for now I just wanted to do one normal mare and stallion pairing.

Wow! For once, a CadenceArmor story that is clop. That's certainly rare to find here since most Shining Armor stories are TwiArmor clopfics.

Alright, read it, loved it.
A few grammar errors in the beginning dialogue. Por exemplo:

“C-Cadence. I... I don't think... I don't want to hurt you.” he said behind her, concern in his voice.

- That period right there? It needs to go.

Have another fave and upvote, but work on that grammar for the dialogue.

Steamy, Passionate and down right lurve! Tho, I have a feeling some pony is recording this on tape...:eeyup::trollestia:

Wow... Just, WOW. I want to jump up and down in joy that there is still hope in this world when it comes to sex. Just browsing for a story... Damn, fetish fetish fetish lesbian lesbian lesbian fetish gay incest bondage and every perverted thing.

Here is some genuine love that is not just good and genuine, you can be a Christian and still enjoy it. (Anybody who says a Christian cannot read sexy stuff has never read Songs of Solomon...)

Beautiful. UP VOTE. We need more of this.

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Y'know, despite me being a Christian and generally disliking any clopfic... I have to agree with you. I liked this.:heart:

4399661 You're not the only Christian brony. To be honest, this one felt heartwarming compared to the other clopfics I've read. Given that there were some grammar mistakes, they are minor at best and the author wanted to make sure that the story had enough feels.

This is such a beautiful clopfic of the royal couple. I really love the characterization and the writing as well. Good work. :twilightsmile:

Very nice and touching fic.
I have to ask for one small thing though:

“I... I’ve never felt something so good in my entire life.”
He smiled and nuzzled into her mane. “Me either.”

If you could please change it to: "Neither do I."

4105826 Do you mean to imply that gay people or people with fetishes cannot feel "genuine love" for one another?

Because that would be some fucked up bigotry.

You know, normally I hate fics with clop in them, but this one was so sweet and romantic that I loved it anyway. :twilightsmile:

Lovely story, it was so sweet and romantic, and not just filled with meaningless clop like most others!

So sweet and romantic! A big huge thumbs up!!!

Love and clop, a perfect couple.

Like and favourite, you deserved :heart:

this was added to mild fetishes , is good clean married sex considered a mild fetish now?....

1691615 You don't see a lot of CadenceArmor clop?

6743565 heh....wow that's a late reply....

I’d like to think the foal that cadence is impregnated with in this story is none other than Flurry Heart.

Every time I re-read this, I obtain a new type of diabetes. This story is so sweet.
It's not like any other clopfic, really. It's got that passion that really drives home they love each other. And that they're, you know, making love. Ugh, so cute:rainbowkiss:

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My Favorites folder might be a fertile (heh...) hunting ground for similar stories. Not all of them qualify but many of them do.

By far, one of my favorites. :scootangel::heart:

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