This is a story about a guy who doesn't know if he was dreaming or was it reality? The man went on with his usual life when he was suddenly, summoned to Equestria. This was his dream come true. He was told he needed to go on a mission but can he succeed or will he fail.
Was it even reality to begin with?
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UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHH i don't even. each chapter is not even a page worth of story Nothing makes since and you did worst ending ever ''was it all a dream?'' the inly way that ending could be worse is if it WAS a dream. Sorry if i seem like a a hater but this is just how i feel about this story :/
6570263 I know, I suck. My first time writing a fan-fic. Thanks for being honest!
6572667 hey don't worry my first story was shit too and i still suck XD
6572928 Thanks!
6572951 Np man keep at it ^_^
6570263
Jeez dude, it was a first fanfic! ease off!
6684883 Nah....It wasn't really that good but, thanks.
6684894
I haven't actually read it yet, but I will soon. I just hate when people judge first fics so harshly.
6684910 Thanks!
6684914
No prob
6684883 i know but i just feel that he/she can do better. they just need some help and or practice
6688362
You could've said that, instead of "The only was the ending could've been worse was if it WAS a dream" or, "You did the worst ending ever"
6688912 i was a little salty XD
6693893
Yeah...
6694250 :P
I gotta say, this is pretty bad. But believe it or not, I was wayyy worse when I began, and I am still not very good! It all takes time and practice and after about three to four decent sized stories, you will be doing quite well.
6717231 Thanks!
6718009 Cheers mate!
Try getting better with practice and a good editor, this could use a lot of work. But don't feel bad, my fic sucks as well. I only have the first one up and it sucks pretty bad. But, I got an editor who really knew how to polish off a nice piece. And with practice ( AKA some disregarded stories and bad one shots that i never posted.
) I am happy to say i will soon be releasing a fic I can be proud of. And i'm sure you can do the same. Just read others GOOD fanfics and see where you went wrong and can improve. Try to get better pacing techniques. Show don't tell. Try to be descriptive as possible. Get an editor to go over it all and then get a few ponies to look over it and you should be good :)
6933636 I have no editor but thanks for the tips!
Thanks for the watch BTW!
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np