The Finale
"PRINCESS!" I shouted out.
We were finding the Princess in her castle when suddenly, 5 ponies came out with Princess Celestia.
"Allow me to introduce them, they are-"
"Princess Luna, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy and Rarity." I cut her off.
"Yes. How did you know?" The Princess asked me while everpony looked at me in total shock.
"Lucky guess." I replied.
The 4 ponies except for Princess Luna walked to Twilight and Rainbow Dash. They exchange hugs and I continued to talk to the Princess.
"How can we save this world?" I immediately asked.
"Well..."
After The Princess explained everything to me, I went straight to do the task. First, I have to get equipment to fight the robots. The 6 ponies followed me. I went to the weapons shop and was planning to buy bows,arrows,spears but I realized I had no 'Bits' which is the currency they used there. Luckily, Rarity, one of the 6 ponies, manage to sweet talk the cashier and I got the equipment for free.
"Thanks Rar, I always knew you were a sweet talker but I didn't know you were that good!" I thanked Rarity.
"Oh, no problem, darling." Rarity replied.
Next, I had to go get potions from Zecora, a zebra which lives in the Everfree Forest. When I entered, it was so dark that I couldn't see anything but luckily again, Twilight had her horn glow so we could see. Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie stayed at the entrance of the forest. We finally manage to find Zecora's hut.
"So, hi. The Princess asked me to ask you for some potions to fight the robots." I said to the zebra.
" I've got no ingredients to make the potion you want, but there is a way and you have to get a plant." She replied
"Okay, what plant is it?" I responded.
"The plant is a heart of a Timberwolve, better go quick or it will move." The zebra replied.
I know what a Timberwolve is...I quickly bolted out the door to find a Timberwolve.
"*panting* I finally found it." I thought to myself.
The Timberwolve was eating a dead rabbit. I quickly jumped out of my spot and throw my spear at it. It howled in pain and the pieces broke. I ran up to it and quickly cut the chest of it to get the heart.
"I better get out of here before it gets revived and, eww, they weren't kidding about the bad breathe." I said to myself.
I made it back to the hut and gave Zecora the heart and a few minutes later, the potion is done.
"Here is the potion you want, Magic,Attack,Defense to hunt." The zebra said to me.
I took the potion and said my thanks. The 4 ponies followed me out the forest and we met Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie there again. Time to hunt for some robots.
"Everybody ATTACK!"
We hunted for the robots but they keep coming.
"We need to find the source and destroy it." I shouted.
"But where is the source?" Twilight asked.
"It's at th-"
"PEW! PEW! PEW!"
I got cut of by the laser bullets shot by the robots. I looked at the solar system on the Canterlot castle. That was where the robot got in.
"I am gonna make a run for it!" I shouted quick to the 6 ponies.
I ran to the mountains with a 100 laser bullets shot on me. I hiked up the mountain and that's when I saw the robots appearing one by one.
"I better quicken my pace then." I thought to myself.
I finally reached up Canterlot and ran to the solar system.
"AHH!" I screamed.
I got shot by one of the laser on my shoulder. The robots were about to shoot some more if i hadn't shoot my arrow to the robots head. I realized i will not make it to the solar system so I shot my arrow at the solar system and it finally broke. No more robots were coming in...but I was on the verge of death. The laser shot made my shoulder flesh burn. I just laid there...slowly dying. The robots which entered Equestria were gone. All I could do is wait there...for someone to help me.
It has been more than 15 minutes when suddenly,
"AHHH! Are you okay?"
I heard a voice shouting in my direction. Was it Twilight...I think so.
"*sobbing* I'm sorry."
I looked on my right and saw the 6 ponies crying over me. My shoulder has finally burned the whole way till' it burned my arm. Twilight tried to healed my arm but she couldn't. At that moment, the Princess Celestia and Princess Luna appeared. They healed my arm.
The Princess said to me "I'm afraid I need to get you back to your planet."
"Well, that's okay." I replied.
I looked at the 6 ponies, and we exchanged hugs. Twilight's horn glowed and when it touched my head, I woke up in my bed with both my arms back. Was it just a dream? I always thought it was what I always wanted, I wanted to be a hero of Equestria, but no. I believe it was only a dream...but I'm not sure. I continued my life as per normal, going to school, odd one out. I wish...I could know if that adventure was a dream, or reality.
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UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHH i don't even. each chapter is not even a page worth of story Nothing makes since and you did worst ending ever ''was it all a dream?'' the inly way that ending could be worse is if it WAS a dream. Sorry if i seem like a a hater but this is just how i feel about this story :/
6570263 I know, I suck. My first time writing a fan-fic. Thanks for being honest!
6572667 hey don't worry my first story was shit too and i still suck XD
6572928 Thanks!
6572951 Np man keep at it ^_^
6570263
Jeez dude, it was a first fanfic! ease off!
6684883 Nah....It wasn't really that good but, thanks.
6684894
I haven't actually read it yet, but I will soon. I just hate when people judge first fics so harshly.
6684910 Thanks!
6684914
No prob
6684883 i know but i just feel that he/she can do better. they just need some help and or practice
6688362
You could've said that, instead of "The only was the ending could've been worse was if it WAS a dream" or, "You did the worst ending ever"
6688912 i was a little salty XD
6693893
Yeah...
6694250 :P
I gotta say, this is pretty bad. But believe it or not, I was wayyy worse when I began, and I am still not very good! It all takes time and practice and after about three to four decent sized stories, you will be doing quite well.
6717231 Thanks!
6718009 Cheers mate!
Try getting better with practice and a good editor, this could use a lot of work. But don't feel bad, my fic sucks as well. I only have the first one up and it sucks pretty bad. But, I got an editor who really knew how to polish off a nice piece. And with practice ( AKA some disregarded stories and bad one shots that i never posted.
) I am happy to say i will soon be releasing a fic I can be proud of. And i'm sure you can do the same. Just read others GOOD fanfics and see where you went wrong and can improve. Try to get better pacing techniques. Show don't tell. Try to be descriptive as possible. Get an editor to go over it all and then get a few ponies to look over it and you should be good :)
6933636 I have no editor but thanks for the tips!
Thanks for the watch BTW!
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np