Loosely based on the ever so popular My Little Dashie, see if I can tug at your heartstrings with this. Also this is in a different universe than my other stories, though you may or not spot some references about them in the future.
When you live alone, you can imagine things get pretty lonely, even for Derpy, one of the most bubbly mares in town, is no different. But when she finds something that will change her life forever, she has a choice to make, and as every choice comes, there will be a consequence.
Chapters (9)
Well first off, why didn't Derpy just think to take her to child service like I would in such a situation? Then have her be own over by dinky.
Also, present tense, meh, kind of distracting when you sometimes go to past tense.
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Yeah, those statements are true. But to immediately take her to child services could result in Dinky being taken away, plus I Derpy was worried about Dinky, and wanted to help her as soon as possible. But she does intend on getting help to Dinky as soon as possible, I forgot to add that she called Child Services in this chapter, mainly because I was kind of rushing through this and getting the art done. Though should add it to the next chapter, thanks so much for pointing it out.
Also, It's been a while since I've typed anything, with my previous series out the way, I've basically been binge watching some Anime, and watching Teen Titans, (the good version, not the terrible new version). So sorry about the spelling mistakes and the mix between tenses, like I said, this was rushed.
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I think Mr. Candie put it best regarding my feelings between the first chapter and this one:
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I am very intrigued to see what you end up doing with this story. Keep up to good work!
I'm so glad to hear that! And I'm a girl by the way.6564508
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Calvin Candie is the name of Leo's character in Django Unchained, where the image and quote came from.
Oh, that makes much more sense.6564712
Love this story so far
MORE...PLEEEEASE !!!!!!!!
Also, see: youtube- a lesser known tale of dinky do by obab scribbler, for a short video.
Thanks for the suggestion, what a heartwarming video. Sorry I haven't posted in a while, I'm having a bit of a writer block at the moment.
But I'm trying to fix it, and update this story. I know it's been a while since I updated it, and I should do it soon.6740469
so cute
........ So much Fluff............. Love it
6761447 Dinky will now become: "Magical love cupid girl"
soooooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuteeeeeeeeeeee
Thank you.
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Oh my gosh! 200 views! Thank you all so much!
sad, but Derpy pulls through that's why we love her
Filthy Rich is a good guy but his wife and kid are brats.
so is it time turner or doctor whooves, man it's hard when characters have more than one name
In this story, he goes by both names.6870615
Right in the feels... Hold on I need a momment. (Bawls uncontrollably)
'There, there, Foxhelm. Everything is going to be alright.'
How do you know, Pinkie? (sobs)
'Its only ch.2 and you read it before.'
Still hits the feels hard.(sniffling)
'I know. But that will only make the Brightside brighter. Now I want to see you smile. Can you do that for Derpy and Dinky?'
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'That's the spirt.'
This is so beautiful I am crying. (wales)
'Tears of joy. You see, Mr. Foxhelm, I told you it was going to get better.'
More... We need mo...(gets whacked upside the head)
'Candymlp12 has more going on in his/her life and other stories s/he is working on. Be patience.'
....yes ma'am...sorry ma'am...please don't hurt me...
Update Yes. Yes. Yes. I love this story. Please continue. Maybe one when Dinky says her first word... Or one with Time Turner and Ditzy get engaged... Or maybe one where Ditzy adopts Ameryts Sparklers... So many ide...
(Gets knocked up the head by Applejack) "Ya need to tone it down there, Sugarcube."
Yes ma'am
Trust me, I plan on it, it may not be very soon. But eventually.
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Amazing chapter though you should write in the top who is talking since it can get a bit too confusing
I am already interested.
So I really enjoy this story but I noticed that it hasn't been updated in s few months, and I wanted to know if you still plan to update this story soon?
I've always wanted to do an IQ test on her but the show doesn't provide enough information.
The poor thing needs a hospital. A new-born baby caught in a rainstorm with a high fever and malnourished is very dangerous.
It's never a good idea to leave a baby alone for a long time. She needs to get help from a friend.
Come on Derpy, you have to tell them the truth!
I still think she needs a babysitter.
I guess we're living in Victorian England now.
Mrs. Muffins seems way too trusting of Time Turner to tell him so many traumatic incidents.
Two main contradictors that I saw, firstly the fact that derpy says her mothers coat is a shade darker than hers but the doc says her coat is lighter than derpys
Secondly is how the doc during dinner was telling derpy essentially not to let the Meanie's words get to her, and then once they exit the restaurant, the doc then posters derpy that she should have done something about it.