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I'll read this in a bit...I like Pinkie Pie x Fluttershy fics, though this is the first clop.
I remember reading this long ago. And yes, it's still good!
I really, really like the tenderness and depth of friendship shown here. If I could just get enough sexy times + feels, I'd be set for life.
Awwwwwwyeaaaaaahhhhhhh, PinkieShy clop!
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I've said it before, and I'll say it again, emotional intimacy is sexy.
Not bad, haha. Laughed at Applejack's reactions to Twilight.
With the exception of Applejack, who lives on a family farm, the Mane Six all live under their own terms away from parents. Rarity owns her own rather lucrative business. So yeah...all six are fully grown. I also happen to know that horses, ponies included, reach sexual maturity before they're fully grown like most animals.
So to me, this didn't make a whole lot of sense.
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I understand that, but I'm going to sort of beg artistic license on this. They probably *are* fully grown, but just not in this particular fanfic. It was written last year while the debate over just how old they were was being worked out.
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Yeah but as someone who's lived around horses for most of my life the idea that they'd be so young as to not have reached sexual maturity and yet still live on their own comes off as extremely grating.
Are you having another unicorn/Earth Pony world domination meeting again?”
“Yeah,” Applejack shot back. “First on the agenda is getting smart-flank weather ponies on a leash so they keep cloud appointments!”
That one had me laughing out loud
Reminded me of House M.D. as well
"What is your plan House?"
"First we take Poland."
Words cannot express how much I like this. Mostly because I'd be embarrassed to say those words
Okay, finally read it, and liked it. Twilight's comment about a loss-of-virginity party REALLY cracked me up. xD
"...came the whisper. Bright eyes met hers and the soft touch..."
*remembers own OC*
*spit-take*
*reads sentence again*
Oh, OK! *phew*
-Glassed
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Bright Eyes is also a MLP Tales pony
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Body Colour: Light Blue
Hair Colour: Orange
Eye Colour: Pink
Symbol: Pink notebook with blue pen
I finally read this, and I liked it.
Very nice on the slow build-up to the actual intimacy, and a nice exploration of how pony culture/physiology might make things work out. I especially like the focus on the relationship that backs up the physical side- that is the much more interesting part of the story. The detail and thought involved in laying the groundwork for this is intriguing. Quite a good read!
This is the best clopfic with Fluttershy I've yet found. The characters are believable and well portrayed, and the erotica is beautiful! Not sure what else to say... I sort of wish that it didn't jump back and forth between AJ and Twilight and the scene. It might have been better to make two chapters, one that follows Twilight, and then the second where the action is. That's really my only issue with it. Thanks for the brilliant work!
This was thoroughly enjoyable. Good on ya, mate.
Not meaning to sound like a broken record, but bravo! I swear this is one of the single best clopfics I've found on the site.
I really love how the sexy-times go by at a realistic pace, at least to me. With how much time is spent between the scenes with Twilight and Applejack, things move so much smoother, even with the breaks. That on its own makes this story worthy of a like and favorite.
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Ehhhh, dunno that I'm a huge fan of this interpretation... If none of the others are going through estrus yet, then they're children. That's weird. I've always seen the Elements as young adults.
Wow, that was amazing...listening to some MLP music and reading this really gets it onnn...
But it's weird, I was always stuck on my PinkieDash OTP, I guess I have a new one :D
One of the first clopfics I ever read. Still love it.
I really like this fic because for me it was the first time I'd really seen Pinkie Pie behave in an intimate and genuinely caring way. Usually people don't tend to think of Pinkie as a character who feels deeply about ponies, and I enjoyed this more caring side of her. Well done!
That... was... actually quite good. I'll have to admit, I feared the outcome would be otherwise. A magnificent portrayal of all the characters, a steady, well-paced build-up, an interesting take on their sexuality... and a rather... sensual, intimate scene. Have some praise, that was astonishingly good work!
Thank you.
dear artistic license nazis:
it's not much suspension of disbelief that fluttershy and pinkie are the only sexually mature ones right now, considering they are not humans. pony and human have much different physiologies despite both being mammals. there's nothing saying that the ponies of equestria don't sexually mature until after they mentally/behaviorally mature, that adult ponies don't have to be sexually mature. it's purely a human construct that we enter puberty and become sexually mature long before our brains are finished developing.
with that being said, this is a worldbuilding and character-building oneshot that would be good for establishing headcanon in a wider selection of stories that I'm about to read. not much criticism for style, I didn't find the transitions jarring (though since I usually skim if I don't altogether skip clop scenes because lack of interest in sex as a whole) and in fact felt the pacing was quite on point, there were no discernible proofreading errors, and I didn't find my self gratingly irritated by lavender unicorn syndrome or a ridiculous amount of purple prose or any other writing trope pet peeve. I did have to reach to make a few inferences here and there but that's on my end (autism).
all in all, I know this is about -checks watch- four years too late, but considering I fell out of the fandom (due to a case of extreme dissatisfaction with equestria girls and the season 3 finale) and didn't hop back in for another three years, can you forgive an honest reviewer who just wants to catch up on three years of missed shipfics?
This was a very interesting take on estrus. How it can be more rougher and harsher to others. Plus the caring passion between Pinkie and Fluttershy was beautiful. Have a like and a fav.
“The same thing I ask of you every time, Pinkie,” Fluttershy murmured.
Try to take over the world