Wow... It amazes me that anypony would even read my writing let alone like it. Still with 2 EQD posts so far I'm shocked on how well liked this storys been.
hmm, I am a fan of Broken wings but I wasnt a big FoE fan. Still I gave this story a chance as i do like the author's writing style. Now Luckybreak owes me a new screen! Every time I thought it was safe to drink anything a read a funny line and spit my drink across my desk. I love the charictors! I love little Silver Skies! And I want a Nighteyes of my own now! The way Orion is written has had me smiling all day as I remember a line I read! Chapter one was emotional and gave a hint into that world, Chapter 2 was very dark but introduced the sweetest OC pony I have ever read, but chapter 3? It was hysterical. I want more Silver Skies and i want it now!
love how the stories going, I wonder what Silver remembers of her life. Also what happened to Celestia and Luna and why all the references to the mane 6 long after their deaths.
1121697 I can answer some of those questions but i can see you havent read fallout equestria yet so i wont spoil the plot on that. the mane 6 are often referenced as they headed up the ministrys, they were very important before the megaspels blew equestria to hell. Silver... well silvers story is going to be a main plot point one of the upcoming chapters. Along with a special guest who i wont name. as for the princesses.. read the original fallout equestria to find out!
737761 iv been waiting forever i write i know it take a while but cant wait its really good i dont see whats everyones problem withe grammerical errors fucking grammer nazis
1321086 well ive had a lot of setbacks the last few months, ingrown nail, blood poisioning and a head injury to name a few but im very close to being finnished. Expect the next chapter before the end of the week *crosses fingers* also its almost double the size of any previous chapter
I guess you want feedback huh? Fine. Seems like orion is getting a lot of attention from the larger fractions in the wasteland, can't wait to see how this turns out. Even got himself a little pet, wonder how this will play out in the rest of the story. The only complaint i have is that it seems like you're rushing the story a little bit.
another good chapter
Your proofreader must be one amazing fellow. You should pay him back by drawing art for him...
YEAS! I loved this chapter! about time i say! keep up the great work!
Wow...
It amazes me that anypony would even read my writing let alone like it. Still with 2 EQD posts so far I'm shocked on how well liked this storys been.
hmm,
I am a fan of Broken wings but I wasnt a big FoE fan. Still I gave this story a chance as i do like the author's writing style.
Now Luckybreak owes me a new screen! Every time I thought it was safe to drink anything a read a funny line and spit my drink across my desk.
I love the charictors! I love little Silver Skies! And I want a Nighteyes of my own now!
The way Orion is written has had me smiling all day as I remember a line I read!
Chapter one was emotional and gave a hint into that world, Chapter 2 was very dark but introduced the sweetest OC pony I have ever read, but chapter 3? It was hysterical.
I want more Silver Skies and i want it now!
love how the stories going, I wonder what Silver remembers of her life. Also what happened to Celestia and Luna and why all the references to the mane 6 long after their deaths.
1121697 I can answer some of those questions but i can see you havent read fallout equestria yet so i wont spoil the plot on that.
the mane 6 are often referenced as they headed up the ministrys, they were very important before the megaspels blew equestria to hell.
Silver...
well silvers story is going to be a main plot point one of the upcoming chapters. Along with a special guest who i wont name.
as for the princesses.. read the original fallout equestria to find out!
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Dammit, having to read another, probably long story...
Le Sigh, hope I can create a pony universe as large in future :D
1160024 i never faved it? what? omg sorry!
i think i double clicked fav somehow :(
I need sleep... but another 3000 words won't hurt.
737761
iv been waiting forever i write i know it take a while but cant wait its really good i dont see whats everyones problem withe grammerical errors fucking grammer nazis
1321086 well ive had a lot of setbacks the last few months, ingrown nail, blood poisioning and a head injury to name a few but im very close to being finnished. Expect the next chapter before the end of the week *crosses fingers*
also its almost double the size of any previous chapter
I guess you want feedback huh? Fine.
Seems like orion is getting a lot of attention from the larger fractions in the wasteland, can't wait to see how this turns out.
Even got himself a little pet, wonder how this will play out in the rest of the story.
The only complaint i have is that it seems like you're rushing the story a little bit.