His name is Free, and he was a slave. But when he found his opening and escaped his owners, he finds that the wasteland holds its own horrors. Will he remain uncorrupted? Or will the wasteland wittle away all that he holds dear until he breaks?
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Treachery... You just know that with a chapter name like that that some serious shit is gonna go down!
Yup, I have seen enough horror movies to know that this is a fucking evil soul eating demon and that this will end bad! Why is it that everyone listens to demons or other monsters when they beckon you closer, it is never a weak angel or poor little orphan with a hidden chest of gold that are hidden away for fudge sake!... None the less, when he gets his face off will I laugh long and hard!... Okay he got a "gift" instead, totally gonna steal that line as well, knowing one of my players will he not be able to resist the change of getting a gift.
Are GMing a Dark Heresy (Warhammer 40K RPG) right now, and I am totally stealing that line for the first time they meet a demon!
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"and the way she pleaded to not die alone as her blood pool beneath her." missing either an began or some other descriptive word here.
"I took a deep breath and stepped over the crushed statuary and through the opening." Don't know if this is a too fancy description for a slave, I had to look it up at the least.
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Hey Doomande! Glad you liked it and glad I could help! Thanks for the edits too!
Interesting, Ooh, heh, oh wonderful.
Great writing as always!
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Thank you very much :)