I enjoy reading MLP fanfics, and I'm writing a little as well, I'm not the best, but i try to make something that is easy to read, and short enough for a quick ride :)
You came to Equestria 1020 years ago, and have been in Celestia's control for 1017 of those years. you have now been free from her control for 2 years, plotting how to get away from her, but the one thing you forgot, was the Elements of harmony, being ready to be used against you.
Tags are there for possible future chapters.(I most likely will forget to add them later)
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Moar plz
6503674 if you want more, then get around 10 people, and get them to write a comment similar to yours. i will ditch the other story, that I'm rewriting at the moment, and do this story only.
so gather people, and you wish shall be granted sooner.
6504585 i shall do this
Interesting so far, a little rushed I think but interesting.
6504589 i shall be waiting for it :)
6504688 sure, it might be rushed, but then again, it was not really meant to be uploaded, but i just felt like it could be good to have up here.
6504925 ok it will be done
i would like to see more :P
6505009 join the club :) burnsgame123 also wants more, only 8 more to go, and i will ditch the other stories, in favor of this one.
6505031 whoop whoop
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6505031 Do fake account's also count?
PS.
MOAR!!!
6508067 in some way yes, but i might look down on it a bit, but then again, i cant tell real account from fake, other than if there is NO info at all on it, other than a username and a favorite of my story, if its a fake account that is being used, i will let it count. so don't make empty accounts.
I quite like the direction you're going with this please update more
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oh stop being a spoil sport and just work on the story i'm interested so are other people.
6596591 very well, for now any other story(the one I'm currently working on) is on hiatus, and this one will be a focus point from now on, until I get far enough with it, or get stuck in it.
Everyone happy?
6597288
No.
i demand cookies with the next story dammit and a hug.
6599450 well, where do you live? might be able to do both :P
6600186
.......i need a adult?
6600792 i am an adult >:)
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yeah anyway EIC also seems interesting i'll be sure to give that a read later on this story here seems like it would good as a kinda short thing maybe a few chapters depending on how you wanna play it out i'm not sure if you have put much thought into it yet though.
6603028 i have thought about it for a while, thinking a minimum of 6 chapters, to explain it all, and experiment with certain ideas in the story. but i have not yet set a maximum chapters yet, im gonna continue until it gets done, which is still in the future somewhere.
im glad you like EIC, though i must say, it is very rushed, which is why i was rewriting it, of course i did it a dumb way, adding more content from the end, instead of from the beginning(did it backwards) so im currently stuck in that story, which is why i began this one.
6603260
i'm afraid writing was never my strong point i can do green text stuff on 4chan more or less decently.
but my grammer is horrible so is the structure of everything.
but generally if you are having issues with another story going to work on something else does usually help.
if you were intending to a re-write sometimes it's often better to delete the whole thing and keep a lil nootpad with all the main points and plot elements then make the whole thing better.
for me i can't can't dedicate myself to sitting there and working on something for longer than a day or two.
i made a lil "spoof" fanfic which i somewhat went out of my way to make horrible this was pretty early in the fandom days and things were kinda just starting to turn into the furfag dominated scene we have nowdays and i kinda more or less vented out while making fun of allot of topical things going on in the fandom at the time.
removed it when i actually started reading more stories on here in the last few weeks.
actually in truth the only thing i actually did enjoy doing and put "some" effort into was fluffpone but of course this was back int he very very start of the fandom before it become all basically "hey let's jerk off about killing basically half sentient Pomeranians" that along with what i felt was the show being more and more watered down really made me loss interest in the fandom and regardless of my motto being that if it makes my penis twitch i'll go for it i still find the majority of what comes from the fandom either just cringy as hell or pandering to a sub fetish just for fame both of which just disgusted me enough to call off my status of "fan" now i just lurk around at random.
6603310 sounds like a great plan, i will keep the first chapter as is, as it got the most positive feedback, while the rest was getting negative feedback.
but for now, im working on this story, because so many people want it, but im keeping the other story on hiatus, so i can resume it whenever i have the time.
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Well depending on how bad it actually was i'd say just start to work on it at random nothing major paragraph here and there type of thing off to the side whenever you have allot of free time one day you know? really it's a pretty common fault i'm noticed people get caught up in only doing one thing and just ignore everything else even if you knock this story out in a month or two if you manage to put a lil work into fixing the other one while doing this one you might actually have it all more or less wrapped up in time to finish it off without having to rush out fixes to be able to continue the other story.
queastion why the fuck did it take so long that santa had to say your fatter then him what the fuck toke u so long u piece of shit bitch(by the way i was kidding but fuck yo cliffhangers and worth the wait homie
6687108 took a while because life has a strange habbit of catching up at the strangest of times. Also fallout 4.
and sorry for the cliffhanger, next chapter is getting there faster, since i have some breathing room now, so expect it up before new year, maybe even christmas :)
6687326 yo do you play xbox 1
6689102 nope, pc. But i have an Xbox 360 for the Halo series.
6689158 dangit
His name is john cena
MOAR pls
6690789 working on it right now.
Hew seems way too relaxed in my option, but this is ok so far. Keep going.
6691110 if you are thinking of the main chracter, the human, then yes, but then again, he has been in equestria for 1020 years already, and he is more powerfull then celestia.
i wont spoil it, but it was only due to a mistake, that celestia got control over him.
*edit*
also, if you want a secret, just reply with "yes" and i will tell you a secret of the story :)
Overwatch coming out. Season 6 coming out. Next chapter of this story. TO MUCH HYPE!!!
6691299 glad you like it so much, as to hype over it, will do my best not to dissapoint anyone.(unless you like celestia, then you might get dissapointed along the story, but i do not care about that, Luna is best princess)
just now realized, i forgot to add luna to the character list
mistake fixed 
yes its getting good
6691157 Yes.
6694245 just you wait, i have so many plans, and so far, no end in sight.
MOAR
6697490 working on it, but I unfortunately have plans tonight, so no new chapter today, but tomorrow, who knows
now your you are discord = /, a super human (god)...
I believe that these fences of mery sue... you will have to put like it is that has so much power. a very good explanation 
6717992 sorry, but that made very little sense to me, maybe I'm tired, or reading it wrong.
hola
primero me disculpo , mi idioma es el español , por lo cual la traduccion puede ser mala en ambos sentidos , estoy releer otra vez el fic , creo que mi comentario esta fuera de lugar , ya que los dos ultimos me dio la sensacion de leer un mary sue , si quieres romper ese bloque de escritor solo piensa que pasa despues y una vez piensa como ocurrio , ves si es coherente o encaja con la personalidad del ellas , bajo que " reglas del anime y comic se aplica " (existe esas leyes en el internete esta el libro xD ) y si puedes usa la grabadora de la pc , narralo como lo piensas y despues te escuchas . son formas .
hello
first I apologize, my language is Spanish, reason why the translation can be bad in both senses, reread another time the fic, I believe that my comment this outside of place, since the two ultimoses gave me the sensation of reading a mary sue, if you want to break alone writer's block he/she thinks that it happens later and once he/she thinks like it happened, you see if it is coherent or it fits with the personality of the them, I lower that rule of the anime and comic it is applied " (it exists those laws in the one interns you this the book xD) and if you can it uses the recorder of the pc, narrate it as you think it and later you listen to yourself. they are forms.
Glory! Glory, to the Red team!
Glory, glory to the Red team!
Glory, glory to the Red team!
We won't stop till all Blues are dead!
Dr Sarge says take two barrels of this shotgun, and CALL ME WHEN YOU'RE DEAD! *kills with shotgun* Ring, ring. Hello, is that you? Yep, you're dead.
You just got Sarge'd.
future gamer luna detected....
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... but that automatically leads to trollestia....
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what gave you that idea?
well, she IS evil in the story, not a troll. yet
Reread before posting, you will catch a lot of mistakes.
6970489 thanks for the tip, i will try to see if i can catch more of my own mistakes.