Sweetie becomes intimitely familiar with why ponies don't let colts and fillies be friends, when she discovers her filly friend only looks like a filly...
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I got a question. Are soda cans getting weaker, or am i getting stronger?
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Both. Can makers have been reducing the thickness of their cans for years to reduce weight and save materials.
Not sure of the relevance though...
7005127 I had a can, and thus it was relevant.
Twilight Sparkle: Princess of Sex-Ed.
In an earlier chapter Apple Bloom is very friendly about Zeccora and Sweetie had no problem with it. Why does she freak out in this chapter?
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I hope the latest chapter cleared that up for you.
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Applejack's been sort of busy lately, what with this being Applebuck season and all. I'm sure she'd have very strong words about all this, if Applejack had her wits together enough to notice.
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It is my headcanon that in an idyllic world of ponies and rainbows, that you can find Plan B growing right out of the ground.
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I'm not that evil!
Oh wait, no, yes I am, just not for this story.
"What? No, that's wasn't an orgy, that was a" "I mean I was just teaching them that uh" "I mean maybe it was a little orgy-ish, but it was just this spur of the moment thing, you know?" "oh Celestia I'm going to jail, arent' I"
'sexually liberated' is one way to put it!
I'm fairly sure it would come close to destroying the world, or at least the nearby principality.
You know what they say, it takes a village to raise a foal...
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I have no idea what that is and I love you.
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I'm going to say a solid no here, not for this story, but for my pony stories in general. I don't know much about the reality of this, but I suspect the true story is a bit exaggerated due to humans finding the idea of fucking someone's unborn fetus to death horrifying, and therefore fascinating. Plus it would totally mess up that plot point that--oh, never mind.
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Give her a break why don't ya! She's been real busy lately with the apples and the buckin' and the... apples.
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Oh sure, no problem. It's not like I needed a social life or anything.
But srsly I'm writing as fast as I can, thanks. I have a harder time posting it here than I do writing it, though.
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Thank you for your constructive feedback. I'll make all those corrections you pointed out, and upload the chapters with proper grammar. I'm glad you showed me all those errors, because I can learn from them now, and won't just sit here scratching my head going "What's wrong with the grammar?"
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"Oh hello, dear. Fancy meeting you here! I was wondering if you thought my hat was
TAKE THE SHOT MONEYPENNY "
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There are few comments that can make me blush with gratitude.
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Oh, no! I'm sorry to hear you haven't been enjoying my story. I know I can't please everyone, but I hope I can convince you differently, or at least give you an idea why I'm doing this stuff.
I have a confession to make. I like campy stories. Silly, contrived, light hearted, when an author sacrifices the realism in order to write what they actually want, that warms my heart. I try to avoid being contrived somewhat, but this story is more of a relaxation exercise than some serious work of literature. I'm writing stuff I want to happen, with just not as much worry about what should happen. Not everything has to make sense for a story to be good, just enough that you don't throw your hands up at it.
I really do appreciate your comment, and I truly regret that you've been having a hard time with my shameless erotica fic here, so I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but...
"Scootaloo, I'm pregnant!"
"That's great, Sweetie Belle! Just what I've always wanted!"
"Me too! Isn't that a crazy coincidence?"
"One in a million, Sweetie Belle! You being pregnant reminds me about how you complete me, and make me the man I am."
"It's like we're soulmates!"
"Sweetie Belle, will you marry me?"
"Oh, how surprising! But yes yes yes! It's just what I've always ever wanted!"
One time lapse later...
"And now you may kiss the bride."
"Isn't it a little weird to get married at 12?"
"Nothing can stand in the way of one hundred percent true love and babies!"
"You're right Scootaloo. Let's live happy ever after, in this new miraculous adventure, that is devoted to raising our child."
(closing credits)
I'm fairly sure the story of a girl becoming pregnant and learning how much she loves becoming a mother has been done to death. There are plenty of other awesome stories to be written, and her pregnancy really wasn't that much of a pregnancy at all. I guess you are right in avoiding this story, if you want serious consequences for every action, and pregnant fillies rolling around town.
My other story goes into pregnancy in a lot more depth. No, my other other story... the one I'm afraid to post here. No, not Boy Stuff. The other one. I told myself I'd post it, if I got far as the crucial turning point, and didn't come to realize it was a flop after all, so I'll try to remember to send you a message if I end up doing that.
This definitely has a story... but not one revolving around some filly being put through the hardships of pregnancy. The pony society is pretty backwards here, but not bad enough that there's nothing Sweetie can do about it.
The good (or bad) news is there's going to be a lot of pregnancies by the end of this thing. But probably not in the mature, serious, uncomical way that you might hope for.
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Perhaps you should thank Ebola-chan?
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It's a lot easier to be a studious sort of pony, when you get spontaneous orgasms from doing mathematics.
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Uh... really? It might be because the writer is a talentless hack. Gosh, I forgot I left that part in. I had to pull out a bunch of friendly Zecora stuff to enable Sweetie's little freak-out here. Honestly, I think this was the point that I realized this story was actually going somewhere, rather than just repeated sexings. Then I went back and fixed up the timeline and... I guess I still have a lot of work to do. The beginning of this story is really rough since I didn't think it would amount to anything when I started.
Oh there it is, right in the first chapter. Jeez, what was I even writing there.
"Hey, Sweetie. I think I'll show reference the show reference."
"Oh no, but show reference show reference show reference!"
"This is a fan fiction!"
"I am shocked by this, and amazed."
7016439 No. I only thank people for two things, free stuff and my own demise. As you can see, the last one is not applicable.
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So, Ebola-chan did not cause your own demise, but instead you are growing stronger every day?
7016648 I get stronger for every story i read, every comment i make, every video i watch, and every pun i generate, I. Get. Stronger!
So...filler chapter then? Meh.
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Nope, this was not a filler chapter, and I apologize for that. Absolutely no fillies being filled, whatsoever.
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It's been 12 hours...
Technically it's from cunnus, -- Latin for woman and, vulgarly, for the vulva -- and lingua -- Latin for tongue. Language is just another word derived from lingua.
I really like this chapter. Clop is all fine and well, but this makes it way more of a world. There are other things besides screwing going on. Complex motivations and even politics. I like it.
love chapters like this, not shure if i should just bang my head like twily did last chapter ore go hunt down chearalee for scaring the foals like that