Sweetie becomes intimitely familiar with why ponies don't let colts and fillies be friends, when she discovers her filly friend only looks like a filly...
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Wow...what trolling thing to do Sweetie.
Talking with a guy about something serious mid coitus is the absolute worse thing you can do...but it is pretty funny.
interesting at first glance this seems to be a shameless clopfic but if you read it it turns out to be an actual story
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"Scootaloo, I think we should start seeing other ponies."
"WAHT?!"
The really troll thing is she wasn't talking with him about something serious. She was telling him about it, and insecure that he wouldn't cum inside her, so she made sure he would even if she told him. She wasn't doing it to laugh at his thought processes limited to "Thrust in filly, me squirt now," but rather to provoke him, taking advantage of that narrow focus to drop a bombshell on him, so that she could learn more about him and colts in general. And in its own twisted way, trust Scootaloo more, for his lack of self control. She sought a kindred spirit in a time of extreme vulnerability, by trolling the fuck out of him. Also it's sexy when the boy tries to hold back after it's way too late to get off the ride.
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Ohhh ho ho, I haven't even gotten started yet.
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6542839 then i look forward to what you got
When is this supposed to be set? Part of this chapter implied Nightmare Moon, but Sweetie and Scoots hadn't met Apple Bloom by that point (hiding under the same table notwithstanding).
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Hiding under the table withstanding, means Call of the Cutie took place somewhere between Twilight's arrival, and the coming of Nightmare Moon. What, you thought Twilight made all those friends in a single day?
But seriously, I just didn't see a good place to fit in Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle's introduction to Apple Bloom, and instead of massively reworking the story (again) I figured I'd just roll with it. I could probably excise that stupid flaily stuff at the beginning making a casual mention to Apple Bloom, and stick her somewhere in later, but... meh.
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Gender specific clothing does have a hint of sensibility to it. Humans and... ponies I suppose, want to have sex. Most of them want to have exclusively heterosexual sex. So, if I wanted people not to have heterosexual sex with me, I'd try to conceal what sex I was, but since most people do want to get laid, it makes sense for them to want to see girls in dresses and boys in pants. Just on a grossly practical basis, it helps people with vaginas figure out how to get a penis in it, and vice versa.
That sensibility goes completely out the window though, when you realize that clothing is meant to conceal the genitals... so why would anyone hide their genitals, and then advertise which genitals they have? Your vagina looks sort of like flower petals, so to protect your sensibility, you cover it up with a dress that looks like a giant plant vagina, with plant vaginas drawn all over it? Thus, the My Little Pony world with its open bottomed dresses, lack of underwear, and suits without pants, makes far more sense than human clothing, both advertising a sexual role and not trying to hide it, or else not advertising anything at all.
...then Rarity went and designed those Gala dresses. Canterlot fashion has never recovered.
It is kind of funny to think about who might know about Scootaloo...I mean does Rainbow know?...how about Diamond Tiara?...of course with this new information Sweetie has gotten there is a high likelihood that Apple Bloom might not be able to hang with them anymore...unless of course it slips Rarity's mind...
Did the last scene also serve to test to see if Scootaloo would still stick by Sweetie's side? Cause, Scoots apparently was able to stop himself for a brief moment, or was he just doomed to be unable to by that point?
I gotta admit, I'm still feeling strange about this fic. I'm still unsure given their age is still fairly young, granted they are clearly slightly older than in the first chapter (and thus a little bit less off putting), but still find it rather...heart-warming. It really like how you're writing this story so far, it still feels very natural how their progressing: maturing mentally as they learn more about what they're doing, but also maturing in their bond as they do. At least, that's how this story feels to me right now. BTW, serious respect for how you handled the last chapter, making that still feel like '"innocent" discovery' couldn't have been easy.
That's somewhat of a bittersweet, but most tender cliffhanger. Though something feels ominous about what Rarity warned her not to do if with foal... Well, don't see a sad or tragedy tag so... *shrugs away bad thoughts* I'm sure everything will work out. On the bright side, she's young enough to a point it won't affect her school life too badly, and she has Rarity. Doubt Scoots would leave her though, though there's the slight issue of how the orphanage will react to one of their colts making a baby with some other filly.
I feel pretty bad for Apple Bloom. Hope she finds something by story's end who can make her at least half as happy as Scoots and Sweetie are with each other, not that they don't love Apple Bloom already but the poor thing still can't help but feel alone and envious of those two despite it all.
Whelp, nice to see someone use the whole "Nopony ever bothered to check or ask or noticed Scootaloo was a colt the whole time" idea. It was executed adorably.
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Scootaloo wasn't exaggerating when he said everypony.
And yeah... it's kind of a swift end to a strong friendship, getting found out after you've inadvertently made your friend pregnant. The clearly sensible, professional, mature course of action would be to force her to give up the foal for adoption, and separate them forever so she doesn't get knocked up again. I'm sure that's exactly how the story is going to go.
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None of us have a choice about what we want and what we don't want. You can't just stop wanting something. Giving up something you want out of necessity sure, but deciding not to want it? It's even more poignant in sexuality, where we can watch ourselves grow from not wanting something, to wanting it more than anything. So if Scootaloo had no choice in wanting to cum inside Sweetie Belle, can you really say he was doomed to do it?
Really if he did stop, that would have made him a lesser pony than he is, lacking that fiery, unquenchable passion that drives him to keep going.
And yes, she was trying to test him, but even she realized that she threw the results, unable to be objective about what they would be.
One thing about me is that I find personality sexier than anything. That's an excuse prudes use to deny that they like sex, but for me it's more a matter that sex can be off-putting and ugly, while still being totally freaking hot, because of what my experience is, and how it makes me feel. Or vice versa. I don't write about hunks and hyper bimbos, but about nice people who might not have the perfect appearance, but love each other, so it makes my stuff feel a bit different from most porn. Though I have to admit Sweetie Belle's ass is objectively the bomb.
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Yeah, kind of weird that Rarity would not want her to be intimate with Scootaloo anymore. Then again, how many of us would encourage our kid sister to go and keep screwing some punk? I'm fairly sure Rarity's concerned with emotional fallout, in her own misguided fashion.
I will confess this story may have one tragedy, but you can pretty much see it coming from a mile away. I wanted this story to be light hearted in general though, so I am certainly aiming far away from tragedy and sadness, even if my imagination keeps cooking up plots like Sweetie dying of anemia, or Apple Bloom giving birth in an alleyway in Trottingham right by the cardboard box that shelters her only remaining possessions. Sure it could happen, and I could make a logical progression of events to such horrible ends, but I want to write about something I enjoy, not like in... oh no, now I'm thinking of that other story, the one I'm not posting... darn it, Zecora!
I am so conflicted over the answer to this.
6550882 I guess I had a bad choice of words with my last comment, sounding more negative than I meant it to be, my sincerest apologies. What I meant was that him being past that point of no return, where he'd just...peak without any further 'motivation'.
That I can support. Don't get me wrong, looks are still a plus for me, but after a particularly bad crash-and-burn attempt at a relationship, I've found a beautiful personality to be more appealing. With that said, I'm even more certain that this piece truly is one of those diamonds in the rough I can really enjoy reading.
BTW, if you do decide to do that tragedy bit you mentioned, I'm really hoping that it will be light. You're more than welcome to make it as heavy as you want though, it is your story afterall, and in my opinion, you do have the final say what goes into it. Even if it is, I'll try to read it as best I can, just cause atm I feel this story is worth it. I'm really turned off of stories with tragedy tags just cause I get really existential after reading anything of that genre and I don't particularly like it when I do.
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If the tragedy I'm thinking about doesn't make you laugh out loud, then cringe at what you just laughed at, I'll be very surprised. It'll be a...while anyway.
Oh, unless you meant that other story I haven't posted yet. That horrible, awful, tragic, grimdark, edgecrapsacknasty story that is so incredibly awesome that I can't stop writing it. That one definitely avoid, if you ever see it, at least until after it's hit rock bottom.
My "Straight to Belle" story doesn't have tragedy in it, but do avoid it if you have problems with existentialism. I'm somewhat troubled in that regard, and not pulling many punches in that one.
Hating how much I'm liking this o.O
Wish back to belle wasn't in the pit, I'd have more laughs and feels and less confused, very confused and thoroughly awkward, disgusted but extremely curious, almost to a morbid level boner
Well I'm personally glad you put so much detail into it. To some it might be repetitive, but to me (and many others surely) I just love reading the extended scenes of how Sweety feels in various ways about Scootaloo's penis filling her. It's rare to see this kind of thing described in so many words and still be interesting so I cherish this story for it.
ha lol just reading the titel...
reaction.: "OHOH"
now you got me thinking, did in a "real world setting" the pony fashion minded pony's think those dresses are some kind of new kink wear ?
and off course the heroes are still too jung and innocent to even notice ore fashion pony's are just crazy