Changing of lives

One day, a teenage boy finds himself alone in the Everfree forest wearing nothing but his underpants. He doesn't know how he got there, but he will most certainly try to find out. Can he find Twilight Sparkle and fix this mess?

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Paladin Redflare

Paladin Redflare #1 · May 30th, 2012 · · ·

I already have like 10 shitloads of HiE stories that i'm reading... but the description makes this sound worth tracking, i'm in... you'll find no mercy from me if I find a hate filled teenager.

wariyoshi

wariyoshi #2 · May 30th, 2012 · · ·

669755 Quite the opposite

decay

decay #3 · May 30th, 2012 · · ·

i don't even

SomeoneD

SomeoneD #4 · May 30th, 2012 · · ·

Okay.

Omniscient-Human-In-Equestria stories are near enough a dime a dozen, and if I'm being honest this doesn't do much for me to get me interested. The grammar and typing seems a bit rushed, and the idea itself is rather overplayed. Unless your character has a reason for being there - an overarching plot, perhaps - then I don't think this will stand out much from the typical Brony In Equestria stories.

This would need a major rethink to be anything but a typical brony story.

If you need any help with this, let me know. You show some promise, and I'm more than willing to give you some advice. :)

wariyoshi

wariyoshi #5 · May 30th, 2012 · · ·

669894 Yeeeaaah I realized I prooobably should've used my other ideas for my first fanfic>.> I was uploading it this morning when I saw like 3 others with the same topic and I thought to myself "Fuck my life, What was I thinking?" Still, I do have SOME topics left for the future, and I have at least 1 or 2 that I'm 99% sure nobody's done before. That being said, this wasn't really a fanfic and more of a test I didn't know if lasers would shoot out of my computer because I did something wrong and my account would get banned for life, this was strictly generic because I wanted to learn the ropes of the system of this website, due to the fact that I'm sort of a nooby brony. Still, I did hope some people might enjoy this somewhat, and I'm sure it was at least entertaining in some form to a majority of the audience (Whether people are laughing at me or with me ).