After almost a year the Disarray brothers have finally gotten into their new lives. Rage has succeeded in his career, Silver Lining has established a relationship with Pinkie Pie and Monarch fights social interaction every day. Life is good. Until a certain blue unicorn tampers in things she doesn't understand and now the elements of harmony accompanied by the brothers Disarray and their father Discord must stop the coming of a new ice age. But before all is said and done that will be the least of their problems.
Chapters (3)
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mmmmmm....smells like a Monarch x Trixie ship to me. I approve. Now we just need to find a way to get her to dress up like Dr. Girlfriend
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A good beginning to the next part of your story. I can't wait for the next chapter. One thing to watch for though: there are a lot of missing punctuation marks, usually commas, though I did notice one or two missing periods as well. That was something I noticed in Part 1 of the trilogy as well. Aside from that though I didn't notice any significant errors so keep up the good work
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Bro ya killing me with this wait for an update
846653 Sorry, just got back from a trip to Italy with my AP History class and before that finals. But I have plenty of free time to write now.
Yay I love this story
A-an update?
Sorry about the wait I got really distracted with what is probably my last summer vacation before college since next year I will probably be focusing on moving out and new locations
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My long term project "The Disarray Trilogy" is being put on hiatus. I simply have come to realize that I don't have the skill to write the rest of the story properly. So for now I am going to practice with more one-shots until I feel that I can write the rest of the story with the care it deserves. This will take some time so I apologize to the twenty people who read TDT. I plan to reedit and revise a more recent story Overshadowed and have plans for next month to write "The Legend of the Headless Horse" after that I will try to write one story a month. I am not sure when I will feel that I am ready to return to my original work but for now the brothers are going to take a rest. Thank you for your patience,
Ink Blotch
1312170 Noooooooo!
i love this story 
please hurry! 