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Damn cliffhangers.
dun dun duuuun! Can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the great work! Must... read... more!!!
Did I say that I wanted Twilight to be with Spitfire earlier? I meant Trixie.
There's never enough Twixie.
Cutting...Edge.....alright dood,I'll send this out to take him out.
That's a lot of Trixie and not a whole lot on anypony else, which is cool if u need to build her up story wise, dood.
How have I missed this fic for so long Read allt he chapters and had to bite my tongue repeatedly to not laugh too loudly.
Very nice build up of Trixie's character. I bet it's AJ in the doorway, she would be sneaky enough to make sure Rarity wasn't up to her devious trickses
Needs more spitfire! Spitfire, it's game time. All that competition and pressure game face on. You can do it.
Wonder who I'm rooting for in this case...
also tracked and faved!
We have a battle going on.
AppleJack supporting Cheerilee
Rarity supporting Trixie
Fluttershy supporting Spitfire
And then we have Twilight Sparkle who have no clue on whats going on, and i would still prefer her to get together with Spitfire, or end it all by saying she is into stallions
AH-HA! I'LL SAVE YOU RARITY!
*toots a flute*
Dangit Wrabbit, why do you have to make Trixie likable, and cute? How am I supposed to unilaterally hate her when you make her so relatable
Probably the best cutie mark story I've ever heard for her though.
can and hid it her tail
hid it IN her tail
-continues reading-
Celestia damn it, I swear you're doing this on purpose..... -_-; Now ALL three of them measure up! Argh!
Choosing is just getting harder..... But, that just means that you're doing a damn fine job. Brilliant as always, Wrabbit.
Damn you, making me unsure of who to root for in this story. All the ships are so interesting and are even more interesting as a clustership bomb being dropped on an unsuspecting and oblivious Twilight...
...I have decided to support Twilight getting all the mares.
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i cant wait to see if twilight picks up on trixie or spitfire
796513 Harem-fic for the win!
I'm personally supporting Twifire, if it ends up being a single-ship fic.
Incoming Wall-O-Responses! Incoming Wall-O-Responses!
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Cheerilestia? Why that's just BRILLIANT!
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It might happen. Might I say, because I already have like a half dozen alt endings floating around my head.
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It's just as rare as Cheerilight, really. Only two each of those that I know of.
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MOAR is on the way! Just hold on, and don't eat the other kids!
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Enh. What can you do? Other than come back for more! [/evil laughter]
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Congratulations! You are the 100th comment! You win a Kewpie doll!
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Careful. Some ponies around these parts consider them fighting words!
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Precisely what was happening, dood. But don't worry. there will be flash backs for Spitfire and Cheerilee as well.
...
Dood.
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Thanks for the support! As for who it is at the end, I dunno. It could be Spitfire or Cheerilee come back early to check up on their favorite pony, or it could be Fluttershy making sure nopony gets one up over on Spitfire while she's away, or it could be Celestia here to check on her favorite student, or it could be Cutting Edge trying to find the mare of his dreams, or it could be... okay, shutting up now.
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You seem to be one of the few who is.
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That would be a twist, wouldn't it?
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That just means I'm doing it right. Don't worry. The hhhnnnggg you feel in your chest will go away on its own. Thank you for the cutie mark remark (wait, what?). I wasn't aware that anyone else had done one for her. Of course, any story I've read with her in it is a Twixie story because Twilight is best pony after all.
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Thanks for the catch. I'll fix that.
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Thanks for the kind words. I swear, it's all on accident! I never meant to change anyone's opinion on Trixie, honest! ::is unable to hold in maniacal laughter::
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That seems to be the most popular choice. Hmmm...
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They are getting a bit more obvious, aren't they?
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That seems to be the second most popular choice. Hmmm... x2
NOOOOOO! *Gets a grim look*
Spitfire is getting behind..
Come on Spitty You need a large comeback!
A great and amazing comeback
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Lunar Justice
About halfway through the chapter I said to myself "I know where this is going"
So here's my forecast
Final score:
Trixie - hooks up with Rarity
Cheerilee - hooks up with Applejack
Spitfire - hooks up with Fluttershy
Twilight - FOREVER ALONE
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Shouldn't be too hard for a Wonderbolt to come up with a come-from-behind victory.
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Damn! You've figured me out! Now I gotta change it!
damn, i never liked trixie before. She's maybe my second least favorite character on the show, but this chapter made me freaking adore trixie. i mean, da fuck. i was alllll about spitfire winning this thing but now i just can't decide.
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...whether you should live or die, oh you'll prob'ly go to heaven, please don't hang your head and cry...
799056 WHAT!!
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I love hearing that I managed to change someone's opinion of a character. It's very flattering.
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Calm down, it was only a joke. I have an ending firmly set in mind, and I'm sticking to it. That's not to say that there won't be alternate endings to satisfy those in the audience whose hopes differ from my vision of direction for this story.
By the by, the clop is coming (heh heh, puns... ), it's just taking longer to arrive than I had thought it might.
Oh jeez... Twilight's so oblivious. So cute! This story is so awesome! I hope to see Spitfire more, but that's just me. Great job on the story!
I´m 100% behind Twifire! Get that adorkable bookworm, Spitfire! You´re a Wonderbolt, the others got nothing on you!!! Take her to the skies at night and show her the stars she loves and KISS HER!!!!!
This fabulous chapter brought a few manly tears to my eyes
Go Trixie!
Score Card
Trixie. 3
Spitfire.2
Cheerilee.1
just to let anyone who cares know . I am praying for Spitfire to win this. with Trixie in 2ed. I an not a Cheerilee fan. heck I almost skipped this story because it was so Cheerilee heavy. but dear god I am loving this!!
OH NO! TWILIGHT FALLING FOR A STALLION! HETEROSEXUAL SHIPPING! EMERGENCY, EMERGENCY, ABORT ABORT!! INITIATE EMERGENCY PROTOCOLS!!
Ahem. Lol sorry, couldn't resist. Inb4 our mysterious visitor is Rainbow Dash ready to rain on Trixie's parade. Also...stop making me like Trixie. Seriously. Stahp. I'm supposed to hate that bitch. WHY YOU MAKE ME HAVE FEELS, AUTHOR? WHY??
Loving this so hard. Er mah gerd it hurts.
im sorry for necroposting but as nobody said it
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Are you a German spy?
2251329 Probably a french spy.
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Or a Swedish thief.
"Jag har en plan." (I have a plan.)
"Lysande Sickan, lysande!" (Brilliant Sickan, brilliant!)
Very well done. This is my new head-canon.
Now I have a challenge: make time with Cheerilee and Spitfire just as emotional and cavity inducing. You have been terrific so far, don't let me down.
Who calls their filly Crushah?
Her parents must have really hated her for some reason.
Wow. Toot-a-loo could give diamond tiara a run for her money in being an absolute jerk
honestly wish there was a little more Sparity going on..
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803709 i wonder why my heart feels dead inside, it's cold and hard and petrified, lock the doors and close the blinds where going for a ride.
A nice bit of back story to explain Trixie's character and show that she is very sincere about her feeling for Twilight. I still like the other two ships more but this chapter got me to consider and even root for Trixie.
Absolutely loving the story!
And here is the theme song for the fic:
ok, just need to point out, Trixie never ridiculed Twilight Sparkle. Twilight saw her friends being the absolute worst kind of audience and basically hid while Trixie taught them all the kind of lesson I think all us creators wish we could teach the trolls in our comment's lol
will update more as I read, but I love it when trixie and rarity team up. its so good.
"“I'm sincere, Trixie! Even trying to stand up to a creature like that, let alone defending a town you just arrived in speaks volumes about your character!” Twilight ducked her head, trying to catch her gaze. “You notice that nopony else was stepping up to do something. And Ponyville isn't exactly totally bereft of unicorns or capable fighters.”"
This is exactly how I feel. Good catch on this