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If you could point these grammatical errors out to me, I'd be happy to correct them. Keep in mind the errors within dialogue is entirely intentional, and if you think this is bad, just wait 'till Applejack shows up!
This interest me...to the trackmobile!
The Ka-Mare Sutra is always sticky... Remind me to never touch that book if I'm ever in Equestria.
Ah, the plot thickens deliciously! XD The interaction between these three armorous mares, both verbal and otherwise, was absolutely hysterical to read! You sir/madam, are a comedic genius. And I salute you for your efforts! ^^
On another note, seeing as Twilight/Trixie's been done to 'complete' and utter death, I find myself leaning towards Twilight/Cheerilee or Twilight/Spitfire. The only issue is, you've portrayed both those characters so very well that I just can't choose between them at this point! Ah well, more to look forward to in the next chapter.
Fantastic as always, Wrabbit. Keep 'em coming!
My apologies to those who read this chapter before this comment. I had forgotten that I needed to add in the bbcodes for italics in the story when I copy/pasted from my computer. All fixed now. Enjoy!
697602 Glad you liked it. I had that doughnut scene in my head for weeks now, just begging to be written. And I'm glad you can't choose between them. It means I'm doing it right!
Oh you silly silly reviewers. I laugh at how you limit yourself to a two sort of relationship. Clearly the only way this bisected love triangle can be resolved is with a THREESOME.... er I mean a FOURSOME.
Why? Cause the more the merrier :D.
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Faved, liked, and looking forward to more!
Twilight, you have TWO pegasus friends and you've NEVER seen their wings up close before?
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"left her home to continued her rounds" little things like that.
"The familiar dulcet tones bringing a smile to Trixie's face." Fragment. I think you probably meant that period before this sentence to be a comma.
"almost a decade ago, has anypony shown" I'd change it to had since this is past tense.
697825 This is -very- relevant to my interests.
Rooting for TwiFire, personally.
This is so ful of win
Im Rooting for TwiFire cause there are zero fics about them. Twixie is sweet but has happened to many times
Cherilee x Twilight is alredy existing to a small decree soo! TwiFire may you win!!
Or you could make three different endings where each one of them wins.
699410 oh there is a TwiFire fic. "The Seduction of Twilight Sparkle" Is the name but its on hiatus at the moment.
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Thank you kindly. I'll give those a once over again. And there's a few reasons why Twilight never really looked before. One: she has seen diagrams in books, and thought that was all there was to them. Two: It's never been an area she thought to really study. Three: Those are her friends. It would be like asking your friends if you could really inspect their hair, or their foot. It could get kinda creepy. But when Spitfire was showing off her wing, she saw the perfect opportunity, one that may never happen again.
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Hmmm... two or three different endings and one true ending? Kinda like the movie Clue? I may just do that. But I do plan on continuing the story after she chooses, so they'll have to happen after I finish the story. Like the bonus material on a DVD. And yes, there are a few TwiFire fics out there. You just have to use the search options near the top of the page.
I was kinda hoping Spike would do some sort of threat thing if they cause too much trouble for Twilight or him.
Also, Cheerilee may be enjoying sleeping on Twilight's flank, but it's not gonna be good if she isn't the first to wake.
699730 i already gave a twifire story in my last comment(683978), but i like to see a good one with Cheerilight
EDIT: the only Cheerilight i can find is the The F-Grade Drinking Game, and that doesn't really sounds interesting for me
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Have you tried the Romance Reports? Starts out kinda odd, but once the Cheerilight starts, it comes into its own.
706062 You could try "Romance Reports" by SleeplessBrony.
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romance reports? didn't sound so intersting for me, and isn't that twiluna? well i can try it out
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It's complicated, and I wouldn't want to spoil anything for you. Just... keep an open mind with it.
i see this story is now marked "mature". dude, you're not gonna make this a clopfic are you?
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Eventually, there will be some cloppy bits. I have this fantastic scene in my head that will just . Not. LEAVE! This story was always intended to be marked mature, I just clicked the wrong button by mistake initially. Sorry if this inconveniences anyone.
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Tenchi Solution? I like the way you think.
Personally I'm partial to Twixie, but that's common enough already...
Great story so far, I'm really enjoying all the little posturing and one-upsmanship (one-upsponyship?) from the three. I've never been a fan of Twixie ( I know Pinkie, it's such a surprise) but Romance Reports made me a Cheerilight fan, and I have yet to see a good Firelight fic (although I haven't gone looking at all) so either of those endings would be nice to see. Although if I were to decide it'd be a threesome while Trixie is outside watching
Great story! very well written, moar soon?
TwiFire ftw Hope Spitfire wins Twi :3
Because it would be interresting, and i think Twixie is waaay to common, and Cherilee is not my favorite.
You know, I actually tried to find this, I faved it and it just disappeared from my list of favorite stories, making me believe you bailed this and destroyed it, that made me sad.
Seeing it update makes me cry tears of joy.
Protip: if multiple endings come up, i suggest 5 endings, one for each mare, a ending where neither wins and a ending where Twilight "samples" from each "dish" Air quotes intended. What the quotes words can be replaced with is up to whom ever reads this.
It's been a while since I seen her this excited about something.
*since I have seen her this excited
Cheerilee would hep Twilight to frame
*help
(sorry, it is a great story with some of the best imagery I've seen out of this site, and I love where the story is going, but I'm a stickler for this stuff.)
Simply fabulous so far can't wait to read the next chapters oh wait I don't have to there is a few already here looks im a little late to this party but stills a fabulous one it shall be
Chapter 2 score Card,
Spitfire 2,
Trixie 1
cheerilee 0
the book is sticky I wonder why, If you know what i mean
Whelp, I wingboner'ed.
MUST. DO. HOMEWORK.... BUT. PONIES!!!
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Oh my. The interplay between the three of them is just priceless. This is going to GO PLACES, I just know it. Personally, I don't care who wins, just as long as they all get some action.
Wait... when did Cheerilee walk in?
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1910931 I second this.
This, more than anything else, appears to be an oblivious!Twilight comedy. I did like the scene with the doughnut though. It's so in-character for Twilight to have not noticed the others stealing bites all the time and not even being sure whether she had eaten it!
I expect poor Twilight to be puzzled why her three good friends, Trixie, Cherilee and Spitfire, are busy snarling at each other for the rest of their respective visits!
2623419 So we meet again.
I expect Twilight to be her adorkable self and not realize the cat fight under her nose. I expect Twilight to be more affectionate with her Mane friends: Pinkie drags her home after a party drunk out of her mind. "Pinkssss...that's Sffitspire over zare. See's a Won-won-der-bowl. I heards Soar-in likes piees. Haz he meet yous? I bet he'd like your...your...<vomit> Oh, thankz fer holdin' my's hairs backs. You smexy beast!"
"Oh, thank you! I love you Big Mac!"
"No Rainbow. I care more about you than anything, because I know you feel the same way!" (all platonic)
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Alright, ya got me. Have a well-deserved like and fave.
Yep, called it. This Fic has my attention and I will read it to the end.
I loved the rivalry between those three, how they played and the fact that twi is completely oblivious
you had my curiosity in chapter 1 but now you have my full attention have a like and fav
What?
Finally got around to this one...
4523651 I agree.
And so does Monsieur Candy:
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I rarely write comments before I finished the whole thing but I had to post this here because these mares need a lesson from Darth Subtlety!
(sarcastically) Gee, I wonder why?!
A sticky cover on the Kare -mare sutra?!
Really Mr. Author?
5385018 i think twilight needs a visit from darth subtlety she obviously knows whats going on really sticking a doughnut on your horn she is clearly fucking with them
So it does taste like an ingredient found on a doughnut?