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Isn't she just?
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Where's the fun... well, okay, that does sound pretty fun. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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Thank you!
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She is the least paired with Twilight of these three... now. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_rape.png
And now the ball starts rolling in ernest!
We will know soon....
?
(to spitefire and trixie)
buck the rules i asked first so i get first chance.
sincerely,
cheerilee
1158505 double my bets on the two non unicorns
That one bit with spike was hilarious. I'd do that too
So now the race is even again; but Trixie and Spitfire are having a lot of interactions as of late, which leads me to believe that Cheerilee will win and Trixie and Spitfire will go out with each other, but that's just mean thinking out loud.
It will be a delight to see Shining Armor's and Cadence's thoughts on the fact that three mares want Twilight and I think Twilight is half-aware of Spitfire, while she is starting to see light of both Trixie and Cheerilee.
I got nothing, dood. Cheers.
What is Twilight getting herself into? Whenever somepony tries to date multiple ponies it never works out.
Go Spitfire!!! If only because I'm pretty sure the only interactions Twily and Spitfire have had in show were the episode where Rarity got wings and the episode where they were trying to get water up to Cloudsdale and it makes for an epic crack ship
And Cadence is going to end up dropping a bomb sometime in the future, am I right? One does not simply drop the Princess of Love into a story with no reason...
You're right! Your title was a might misleading! That's mean you know, and here I was hoping that you would give Cheerilee the real chance she deserves, and no, still the same hesitation between the three...
Well, guess we just have to wait.
Spend some quality time with your family, and keep up the good work.
Rooting for Cheerilee!!!
Still enjoying this. It's amusing as Tarterous
The princess of love, In a love story, featuring a love oblivious Twilight and three love struck mares...and Shining Armour is going to be showing up as well...
Oh I can NOT wait to see how this goes down.
(Woo Spitfire! Get her girl!)
Must. Resist. Urge. To do the 'Yes' dance..... Not resisting well!
Brilliant as per usual, Wrabbit. And I have to like that little Trixie/Spitfire moment, a good foundation for those two should Twilight choose Cheerilee. ....Not that I'm pressing.
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The ball is heading for some pins, it just remains to be seen how many will be knocked down.
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Berry Punch: Got it.
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Believe me, I've almost done that several times since the relatives got here too. They say to write what you know, so.... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png
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Several ships are fighting to be first to the harbor. You'll just have to wait and see which gets there first. Also, I saw your comment over on fanfiction.net. I would have responded to it there, but they changed things so that replies go to PMs instead of the review list so that everyone can see them. So... yeah. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
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It will be especially amusing to see Shining Armor's take on her sudden rise to popularity. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Depends on how much swag said pony has. It is "swag", right? That is what they're calling it these days? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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It is a bit out of nowhere, isn't it? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_dayum.png
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Well, it's not quite the same hesitation. They did manage to ask her out, right?
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Thank you kindly.
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Well, that's... aaawww... dang context. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_hmph.png
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Fireworks will ensue! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Soarin_dayum.png
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Heh. I'd pay money to see a human try to do that. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_chair.png
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Is there a new extension for ponyfaces?! Where!?
It might be a bit out of nowhere, but damnit, it makes for an interesting cliffhanger....
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It's a program called Greasemonkey. They have apps like this for a lot of sites, but I only bothered with this one so far. I dunno if they have one for IE (I use Firefox myself), though. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png
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That it does.
Alright that is it put me down for 80 bits on Trixie
Can't wait to see what Cadence has for twilight.
Spitfire seems to be a bit of a popular choose at the moment....... AS IT SHOULD BE!!!
Edit: as a side note put me down for 30 more bits on spitfire winning.
Why do I have the feel that the "five is right out" is a reference to something, dealing with some type of divine explosive? Eh, whatever, loving the story, can't wait to see more.
Twi said yes to all of them this should be VERY interesting. Very Very interesting.
1159255 oh I still have 100 bits on spitfire
1159003 TriFire? And CheeriLight?
Well, then everypony is happy I guess
Trixie and Spitfire wouldn't take losing Twilight too well though, and they would probably leave town. I just don't seem them together, no matter how nicely all the puzzle pieces would fit in.
The Cheerilee part, though...
GO CHEERILEE!
(Also, it doesn't seem many people are rooting for Trixie anymore, it seems to be 50/45/5 [Spitfire, Cheerilee, Trixie])
I don't know why, but I am banking on a foursome.
I still can't decide who to root for dagnabbit!
That's it spitfire, bide your time. those other two are jumping the gun, they don't have enough time to prepare. they don't got the right stuff! but YOU! you got that stuff! that mare was putty in your hooves from the first time you saw her. now go get her!
Here we see how Cheeilee rolls.
Has the advance and then allows her competition to catch up.
I must have you pegged, because I didn't find the title misleading at all. I saw it and instantly thought, "Oh, so they're all going to ask her out and she's going to say yes to them all."
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I'm looking forward to seeing Shining Armor's reaction to the three mares chasing after Twilight, and perhaps finding out if this isn't the first time that colts or fillies have tried to woo the cute and oblivious Twily
Quick note on names (Really hope you don't mind); It's "Mi Amore Cadenza", and the familiarized shortening is Cadance rather than Cadence (Going off of official Merch)
Wait... she said Brothers.... as in plural... OH MAH GAWD
Cadance be preggo?
I'm gonna laugh if she ends up with all three of them in the end.
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Finally! Someone's getting my song references! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png
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Berry Punch: That's 80 for the purple punk alicorn, and 30 more for the mad scientist... got it! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
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I'd join the Empire were it not for the sucky retirement package. Choked to death by Vader? No thanks.
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Probably because you're on the right track? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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i38.photobucket.com/albums/e132/whiterabbit75/demotivational-posters-indeed.jpg
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I wouldn't call the split that bad, but, yeah. I guess everyone's tired of Twixie. Next time, I'll try somepony like... no. No, I believe I will hold on to that idea for a bit longer for another story. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_cake.png
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You're not alone in that. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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Yes! Still one undecided! I still got it!
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Really, how long do they need to- oops. Almost gave it away. Heh heh. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png
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Her sense of fair play can be her weakest point. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png
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Not saying a word about Shining. Nope. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png Thanks for the tip on Cadance. Was not aware they officially misspelled it.
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A little too soon to know that just yet. They only just got back from their two week long honeymoon. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_smile.png
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The possibility is there. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_bedroomeyes.png
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Awesome.
Are you one of them?
Extremely entertaining and delicious story so far. I approve of all three ships, and am placing 100 bits on Twilight hooking up with all three of her suitors.
1163064 Hey spill the beans I'm dyin' over here
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Oooo... landspeeder privileges...
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If I told you, that might reveal too much either way. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png
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Berry Punch: 100 on a foursome. First one to make that one.
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But if I did that, someone else might steal my idea before I can do it. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_bedroomeyes.png
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Worth a shot, though.
I see a place where you used "several" twice in a row, the second time as a minority subset of the first. That's probably incorrect grammar (and/or math) and definitely looks a little sloppy. Other than that, good chapter.
Damn it More I must have more!
this is so well written, and a lot of twists and turns! you have a work of art her and I am thrilled I get to read it. I have already read every chapter like 6 times. I cant get enough.
I am happy to see Spitfire and Trixie getting along a bit more. not all they have to do is team up and take out Cheerilee and we can all be happy.
I know I keep putting the school teacher down and all. but I just don't like her. and if you look at all three back stories you made for this her cant stand up to Trixie's and Spitfire's shuts them both down. Spitfire is where she is because of Twilight and spitfire would give it all up at the drop of a feather for Twilit .
Well thats just how I see things anyway LOL
Again thank you so so, soooo much for giving this to us.
1165520 Ohh I like that Colgate picture
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Can't blame yah for tryin'.
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I'll give it another once over and see if I can catch them this time around. Thanks for the notice. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applejack_lolface.png
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I'm glad I could entertain so well. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_lazy.png
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It's from an app called Greasemonkey. Basically, it adds more possible emoticons to your posts. That picture is called Colgate Bedroom Eyes. This one is my new fave. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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True. It is one of the perks of having no real OTPs. I can make calls like that.
Okay, whew, finally caught up with this story! Now i know who i want Twilight to end up with, but still holding out for a harem ending!
Anyway great story and keep up the good work
Okay caught up from start to finish...this story is....
BUCKING SWEET!!!
There are two potential Celestia trolling scenes I would like to see though
1. Celestia brings all the suitors into a room and informs them that she is too afraid they will hurt Twilight or she will be sad that she can't have them all or something. "So I am afraid I have to send you all to the moon" Cue fake, fancy magic and panicking.
OR
2. Celestia drops them in a pit and gives them each a knife and says fight to the death. CLAW-Plah!!!
Also, put me down for Spitfire, if we can't have the harem ending(which is what I really want)
Twilight is smart, has to be considered a noble with her connections, so she could pull some law out of her butt allowing her to have multiple wives. Hey people in olden times did it, and horses in real life do it.
... And now we get the ruler of love in here. Escalation in 3, 2, 1...
Personally, I'm rooting for Tenchi Solution or Cheerilight. Twixie would be OK, but I think I prefer that pairing under different circumstances. Ballad of TS style is more up my alley. I just can't bring myself to support Twifire here, either.
Spitfire, Spitfire, Spitfire!!!!!
She got answered first, dates last and was/is Twi´s first love as well as the other way around! This is closest to my lovely KnightxMage image i got for the awesome Pegasi Spitfire and the lovely Unicorn Twilight Sparkle i got in my head. Don´t take that away from me, Trixie/Cheerilee! >.<
Oh boy, this gonna be something...
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We need SpitFire!!!!
Who shall smite the naughty in his eyes?
It's "do a little shake" not "give a little shake".
I WILL HAVE MY TWIXIE
Date, set, match...it's on in earnest now. Very curious to see how things go. I do wonder how Cadance is going to fit into all of this, though... Also liked the camaraderie between Trixie and Spitfire. Makes them feel like more realistic characters.
Finally: BERRY PUNCH!! YOU TWO-TIMING, NO-GOOD BACKSTABBER I SWEAR TO CELESTIA IF YOU BUCK EVERYTHING UP I CAN'T BE HELD RESPONSIBLE FOR WHAT I'M GOING TO DO TO YOU!! Seriously, she's actin' all suspicious-like, and I don't like it one bit.
i think you meant did not like