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Fuck Pepsi, Fuck Coke
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Good job! Also, endermen need eyebrows.
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SO THEY WILL GET THEM
like twilight didn't know what that dip was, she hung out with Molestia before, and stayed at twi's house for awhile once.
otherwise funny story.
WIN
Oh twilight, You knew exatly what it was, quit putting on a show and drink from your glass of Sweet cider.
WHAT DID I JUST READ????????????
How is this rated teen?
Great story, though!
Special dipping sauce you say?
How wonderful.
LOL, this is funny but you killed the story right on the punchline. I can see how cutting the story there would be good because all of the readers know that it's over.
"AND WHAT ART THOU DOING HERE?" I demand.
"Oh... Princess Luna... I'm here for the ball at the palace." She says, staring at my hair. Oh dear. Another city pony. Great.
"Where art thou from?" I ask, not really caring anymore.
"Ponyville." Says the white unicorn. She keeps on staring at my mane.
"Princess Luna... did you remember to brush your hair this morning?"
I chuckle, "Of course not! It's far too early for that. And I rarely ever go anywh-" I stop. She has pulled a hairbrush out of her diamond saddlebag and started brushing my hair for me. No, literally. I glare at her.
"Stop that IMMEDIATELY!" I yell at her. How rude! You don't just go around brushing other people's hair willy nilly! She puts the brush back and runs away. How crude.
Brushie, brushie Colgate?
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Let me tell you my reaction to the whole story:media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m33yn6gQLA1r7quy9.gif
The last part, 4:00 pm though:24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lwtt4p5ICT1qz4f4uo1_500.jpg
Da fuck...........oh well, gave me a few chuckles. Thumbed
...Ow. First, you left a few words improperly capitalized. For example, "Black Ops" and "Coke". Second, I'm assuming this is based off the Tumblr ask blog, so if I'm wrong please correct me on this, but Luna and Molestia have a rather nice relationship. I can't imagine, for example, Luna voluntarily watching a porn movie, Luna telling Molestia to "suck it", or Molestia having any interest in playing video games. Third, the general story and writing is poor. The descrion is bland and there's no real direction. Half the story events are completely isolated, having absolutely no effect on anything. And if that last image is indicating that this is a fanfic Twilight was reading and that this is an intentionally poorly written story, then that needs to be better indicated. Otherwise it might be read as, for example, what Twilight's face looked like after what Luna said.
792811 Yeah... I might actually change that
796253 This isn't based off the blog entirely. And I guess this story isn't for everyone, so that's ok.
794117 If you'd give me a reason why you didn't like it instead of 'are you fucking kidding me' then that'd be great.
793110 Thankyou!!
793281 Yeah, that part was a bit weird.
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TWILIGHT IS NOT AMUSED
797064 Why thankyou! I will keep all of your internets.
796253 Well, to be fair, Black Ops is a brand at this point, and nowadays the Coca-Cola company is putting the word "Coke" on the cans, so maybe that counts as a brand too?
Ah, brands, such a pain in the rear.
Da fuk
792444my day. is made from that comment and great story as well
I demand more adventures of Gamer Luna!
noo its hysterical but Why is she so MEAN
And and that dip oh no
hey twilight
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798154
I know they're brands (or in Black Ops' case, part of a title). They should be capitalized. But in the story, they're not. I probably should have been more clear on that point.
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Funny, I thought they were. Yay, looks like my eyes are going at the ripe ol' age of 33.
792444 Dat comment.
800132 In all honesty I don't really know. I love Princess Luna. I think it's just because she has no social skills.
800103 haha I might carry on with this in the future
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(I would make it bigger, but the bigger ones past the 600 by 600 limit by the mods for posting large images.
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Laughed a bit. Really COOL story, and I want moar.
803008 Thanks
803157 Thankyou! I didn't think my writing was very funny so I'm glad you liked it!
I might write a sequel if I can be bothered. 
Other than the fact of CoD being her game of choice, pretty good story. And to those who complain 'bout how the fic is laid out, remember that this is a diary entry sort of thing and what someone does in a day doesn't have to directly relate to other parts of it.
Fuck Pepsi. Screw Coke
DO THE DEW!!!
....... No Comment!
806234 Thankyou! People don't seem to get that!
807855 But you just did!
I...I don't quite know what to do with this, the part of me that demands continuity is screaming for me to give this the big ol' red thumb and stop. While another part wants me to continue for shits and giggles.
So long as this remains a light-hearted trollfic. I may like it.
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. You're captured a gamer's neurosis quite well and the comedy was the icing on the cake. I loved every moment of this.
This was awesome!
806234
Yeah, I dont like cod too.
812098 Thanks! I didn't think man people would like it
812349 Why thankyou!
809000 Oh don't worry. It is