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Well, I'll start with the obvious remark. Closing the italics went, er, poorly.
The bolts are just assholes. Rainbow falls ep pissed me off way more than this one though.
6441978 Yeah, sorry I wrote this on the spot without supervising the whole story. Any suggestions?
6441978 Nevermind, fixed it. Was that the only thing that bothered you about it?
6442025 True but atleast Soarin wasn't a COMPLETE d bag...
6442086
Alright, besides that, just some minor remarks: when one is speaking, the punctuation comes before the closing quotation mark.
Should be...
There are multiple instances of similar mistakes. And...
Should be...
6442090 i was so happy that he had way more lines. I was literally fangirling. His entrance line made me think he was about you start flirting.
6442101 Oh thank you, no one's ever commented on it so I thought it was correct.
Very lovely story! you must continue!
I like it so far! If you ever get writer's block, come talk to me for help.
I LUVV IT!!!
YOU ARE SOOOOO TALENTED!!!! I LOVE THIS NEW FANFIC AS MUCH AS THE HUMAN ONE!!!!!!
Keep going!
(Remember to update the old fanfic too!)
Wanted to write something like this but, two people beat me to it XD
Good Job though!
UPDATE!
UPDATE!
UPDATE!
IF YOU UPDATE I BET YOU 10 VIRTUAL HEARTS
"HEY THATS NOT ALOT"
- QUOTED MLPdior
Lol just submitted a fic but not quite like this, but this is BETTER and longer, which is good news
I really shouldn't have accused you like that.
It was Wind Rider who accused.
6442025 To be fair, Spitfire was willing to go flying off to the Crystal mountains all on her own to make sure that her mom got what she needed to be healthy. They are not great ponies, but they are not terrible either. I think they are learning from Dash at this point.
6444998 I noticed. But I feel like that was only a plot divive and not much other. We'll no doubt have more bolt episodes and with every episode there's a conflict. We'll see more of asshole bolts.
Soarin should apologize. In my view that was the weakest part of the episode the Wonderbolts especially Soarin should believed Dash and stuck up for her. Even if the evidence was against her.
Nice story.
6444623 Yet he believed it... True though. Windrider was a crappy villan
6445279 Yeah, chapter two will have some more explaining on this ^^
6444606 Aww, don't say that beb, would you mind me reading your story? I would love to see your point of view.
....But Soarin gave Rainbow the benefit of the doubt despite her being the only realistic suspect?
6445420 It's called "Nothing We Can Say"
6445406
I felt he was better than villains who existed purely to be something for the protagonists to overcome (like Suri).
6445428 ALL WILL BE EXPLAINED IN LE NEXT CHAPTER O3O
That was so cute!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, THEY'RE ADORABLE!!!
6445185 Maybe, but other than Rainbow Falls, I don't really think the Bolts have been acting like assholes. Anyone who didn't know that Rainbow was innocent would probably have reacted the same way in the newest episode, especially when you remember that they are probably good friends to Spitfire, and imagine how much learning that her mom was sick must have hurt.
I make no excuses for how they acted in Rainbow Falls though. They were kind of straight up terrible there, or at least, Spitfire and Fleetfoot were.
well heres what you gotta understand about this episode. Soarin being second in command was taking his job seriously as he should. and a veteran wonderbolt whom he has known for quite awhile suggested it was Rainbow and that theres a lot of reasons why it could be her. he had no choice but to be stern with her. Soarin did give her the chance to clear her name.
i will admit it would of been great if Soarin would of been able to give a few lines of dialog stating that he wants to believe her, but that what only us shippers would of want 4 sure....lol
Aside from that, nice story
SQUEEEAAAAAAL!!!!
6447842 YES SORRY, FIXING THAT.
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UPDATE FOR MEH PLWASE
I APPLAUD YOU FOR BEING AWESOME!
Love it dude! They may soon be cannon, and I really want them to be. They are just so perfect for each other, and you have no idea how much I love this ship and the two individuality. Do more with them two. Keep up the great work! Little hint if you want I may be writing my own ship with these two, so keep an eye out for that.
Can't wait to read it ^-^
6448292 Beb, dish story is complete
6449006
NAH ITS OK IM LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE NEW STORIES
6449180 Yep, I love Soarindash so, expect a lot of those two.
6448997 Now because of your fic I have full respect for Soarin. Keep up the great work!
Woohoo! New Chapter! Seems like someone's in a writing mood these days.
Keep it up!
OMG OMG OMG!!!! I SOOOO LUVVV THIS!
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Lol
Sequel!!!
Rainbow... (sigh) It isn't that simple, filly. There is something that service requires of you that I'm not sure you understand just yet. He couldn't be your friend, Soarin' at that point. He had to be Lieutenant Soarin. He had a responsibility to the team: to maintain discipline and order.
Yeah, that probably sucked for him as much as it sucked for you. Notice that he didn't just accept Wind Rider's accusations and bounce you out of the team. He gave you time and a fair chance. Not anypony would have done that for you, you know!
FWIW, SoarinDash is the only Rainbow ship that I support.
6460172 What about Thunderlane and Dash? They are pretty decent.
6460397 The thing about them though, Dash has only interacted with thunderlane once and it was her telling him to fly, then she called him lazy. Nothing even slightly romantic or cute about it.
6462974 True :)
Wait when is the Friendship Games released? I'm dying!!!!
Ahhh, this was cute. Instant fave.