• Member Since 3rd May, 2015
  • offline last seen Apr 18th, 2018

SuicidalAngel


Cute, fluff, and love stuff ^^

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Scoots has a crush on the new boy in her class, but she's never had a crush before....what's happening to her?! Well atleast she's got her friends to help her through this mess...well after they stop teasing and laughing.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 23 )

Nice. Good fic. Thanks for showing us this. I enjoyed.
Your first follower,
The Derpy Doctor.:derpytongue2:

5937022 so... how long are you gonna mak this? I like it so far.:rainbowkiss:

5937022

*Looks at the picture.*

R.I.P

1996-2015 died of cuteness overload.

This is good:twilightsmile:
looking forward to more!

but stopped to know on her door hoping to wake her up

_Oh great, is mom gonna make us invite the new neighbors to dinner again_

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I'm going to go ahead and guess this is a 'humanized' story.

Great, now she was gonna have a fail for a mayor grade.

^[major]?

"what if I said no.....?"

^need to cap

"Listen, can't we just start of with a simple 'Hi'"

^shouldn't there be a ? at the end?
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"Um, Scoots are you ok, you look constipated"

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: Still bugs me that everyone seem to spell 'okay' as 'ok', but *meh* whatever >.>

'shut up before I make you'

" will you tell us, what's on your mind?"

^need to cap

"You know what forget it, im not hungry and I don't feel like talking right now"

Heck we was barely her friend,

Her friends didn't know what they were talking about.

^feel like this should be [they was] or [they're]

"Im not in the mood for your antics, Diamond"

He then went to sit next to scoots.

^should be cap

Comment posted by Fic Demander deleted May 4th, 2015

Yeah, it's good. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise, you're doing great.:pinkiehappy:

5940787 Aww thank you, considering this is my first fan fic, I thought it would be bad since I don't have much experience. I guess it turned out ok :twilightsheepish:

5938852 Yeah, really didn't notice those mistakes till' you pointed them out. However I do hope you're enjoying the story regardless, and I'll fix the problems once I get some shut eye. :ajsleepy:

5941911 If I didn't enjoy the story I wouldn't have taken the time to point them out :rainbowlaugh:

Good chapter and you're totally cool with this "being late."

Lol.

Scootaloo bumped into someone. No not Flash Sentry...shut up.

Ooh Rumble got friend zoned :fluttershyouch:

6321289 That *pant* was *pant* so funny.

Reminds me of an OC of mine. :)

Comment posted by LightningChaser04 deleted Apr 29th, 2022
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