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Abramus5250


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One of my favorite mare/woman to pair up with, Spike. Good story!:moustache::ajsmug:

Wait there's a prequel to this?

You know for a... Clopfic... This was pretty heartwarming and cute. Never felt like clop made me smile so much.

Though it felt like Applejack lost her inhibitions after the first time. Oh well.

6791504 Well, she was still "in the mood", and a cowgirl like her isn't going to just roll over and accept what happened.

She won't stop till she's satisfied.

Only you have been able to make a clop fic that warms the heart. Yeah that sounds as weird as it reads. This seemed so rap it was almost nostalgic in a way. The naivety that is common the first time around, the lust, this was more a well written love scene than a depiction of sex. Yes even the primal surge later was just a continuation of the scene. Good job, god damn you, and keep writing.

Spike and Applejack are by far in my opinion the best couple in the Fanbase

"Broke my hymen years ago ridin' horses. Lotta girls in my profession do that. Now try and ride me, but not too hard, I ain't delicate but I ain't no plow-horse either." She'd have to try and get him to attempt other positions, maybe from behind next time.

Applejack was riding a horse... that has to be the most ironic thing I’ve ever read.

There were worse ways to go than sharing your first sexual experience with your beautiful, perfect, amazingly sexy girlfriend.

#1 death from "1000 ways to die"

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