Sapphire's Story

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DJ V0RT3X

DJ V0RT3X #1 · May 28th, 2012 · · · Prologue - I'm Falling. ·

This is a great story so far.

DJ V0RT3X

DJ V0RT3X #2 · May 28th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 - I don't remember anything. ·

Aw, Heil Yea, This is great.

DJ V0RT3X

DJ V0RT3X #3 · May 28th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 - My new home. ·

Great, keep it up.

Sorren

Sorren #4 · May 29th, 2012 · · · Chapter 3 - The walk, Sparky's confession, and Sapphy's feelings for him. ·

I don't quite get this mini-paragraphs thing you're doing. You should generally just have paragraphs. Not a series of sentences with enter hit after them and then a double space here and there.

Sapphire Eclipse

Sapphire Eclipse #5 · May 29th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4 - Unexpected visitor and jealousy. ·

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It's just something I do. Can't really help it!
Thanks for the info anyways, I'll try and remember it!

Abody

Abody #6 · May 29th, 2012 · · · Chapter 4 - Unexpected visitor and jealousy. ·

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