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Comment posted by Brony Tom deleted Mar 14th, 2013

Imma leave now, mkay.

Dial M for murdersex?

You broke the rules. Then you offered a good explanation of why, so I forgive you.

My grandmother is dying of M.S.

2403510 I'm sorry to hear that. I've known people with the same thing.

Well, it was good, and I think you achieved your goal well. I really liked this, though I've never liked the 'feral' vampire. I've always preferred the smart, cunning, near human vampires. Just as long as they don't sparkle.

woah...
Nice backstory. Almost thought this was future instead of past. Then i realized she wasn't aware of being a vampire until later.

dude. i thought i loved your comedy, not serious,messing around stories. this is a whole new fucking level! please write more serious, emotional stories.thank you :heart:

Briefly licking the light switch

For shame, TNAB! You're not supposed to get into the kinky stuff until at least act 2! :trollestia:




"Just erotic. Nothing kinky. It's the difference between using a feather and using a chicken."
— Terry Pratchett, Eric

Liked it a lot. I'm kinda on the fence about using words like marehood and stallionhood and the like. cock and pussy work just fine for me, and I'm sure nobody would complain about using those words instead.

The sex scenes were good, and the gore scenes were gorey. I liked them both.

Kinda wish that golden made doily cum as she was killing her, but that's just nitpicking~

Overall, good times were had. 9/10.

I- I never asked for this!

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Everytime I think you can't surprise me with your works, you publish something even more amazing. This is as always incredibly powerful. I think part of the that power may come from knowing how she is now and it so tightly ties things to the present. The final piece with the rabbit really beautifully hammered home how she changes to cope with her situation. I may have to go back and reread her entry into the Vampire Cheerilee universe just to marvel even more.

Well done.

A little backstory never hurts.

Keep up the good work bro.

Enter the following code into GeneralZoi's Pony Creator, and there you have Golden Ring: 2G3J000010C0FFFFFFFF9D0020100B8FFUN183720H00000040EBFF80FF7FFF04107F3FCC004CB2

2427746 o_0 I didn't know ponycreator had the option of sharp teeth.

2404667 Yeah, that was kinda cruel of Golden to leave Doily hanging.

I swear I've read this story before, quite a while ago...

2678044 Yeah, this is the only story out of 63 I've written to be tagged mature. It's probably not something I'm going to repeat, but I can say that I at least learned something while writing it.

hmmmmmmm... well i researched pony vampires, (unfortunately that steampunk valient kept killing them) any ways, i've seen this vampony (it's a work in progress) and i was trying to communicate that i had a cure, but she kept mumbling " show me a cure, i'll show you an angry, disapointed, and hungry vampire... buck off cat" for the cat thing the usual perception of me is of a black alicorn with 8 wings, leftside white, right black, and 5 yu-gi-oh cards. but realy-the un filtered appearance is a humanoid cat with heavy jackets and a katana. anyhowdle, do you mind if i capture her, mostly because she insists on hunting on my land in the forests and bad lands.

Dayyum, very nice. Well I mean, not nice per se, cause I mean, vampony, though I'm kind of weird and would have been thrilled, but you know. Thoroughly enjoyed.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

This could be used to create one hell of a story.

This would make a great story. Even when it's a oneshot it's great.

A Vampire (pony) thats not a massive, sparkly, wuss... why is this a one-shot?

Ken

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He has an entire series about this stuff. Among other things. Like battle ships. Also Valiant.
The rest of the series.

6181302 well damn, wish i could have found that sooner. thanks pal :pinkiehappy:

This makes me wonder why I haven't done this with any of my own characters in anything more than private role-play.

Honestly, I would totally be with Doily at that point. Extremely hot. I mean, it would suck to die and all that, but it'd be super hot in the meanwhile. Come to the gay side. We have dominating horse vampires apparently.

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