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Astrocity


Wanted for writing and crimes against humanity. Mostly writing...

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At night, when the shadows wake from their slumber and creep along the walls and floor. At night, when the monsters of the dark come out from hiding. At night, when all is still and quiet, one pony remains awake.

A Filly Luna story.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

This was a good read. Writing wise, reading wise and so on. It's an interesting alternate universe though. Nightmare being independent of Luna, the alicorns apparently not that special a pony, Twilight authoring The Elements of Harmony series. There were a few minor errors here and there that I honestly didn't even notice on my first read through.

Overall, positive ratings on the story. The antics of filly Luna were adorable, and the relationship between the sisters was night. I'm interested to know who Nightmare's sister is though. And was it really all just a dream? Canon Luna is a dream walker, so it's not impossible. We never went back to the fridge to see if the cake was gone...

Why doesn't this wonderful story have more views, upvotes and general praise?

6577700 Lack of cover art to grab people's attention. The timing of the story's publishing. Lack of writing or site activity by me. Who knows? But thanks for the comment anyway.

This was pretty good, it was amusing, heartwarming, and emotional. Overall, really great work with this :twilightsmile:

Thanks for a good read, Astrocity. I loved reading every word of it.

Loved it.
Hit me in the feels so hard I cried.

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