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Cameron Nightshade


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It has been 6 years since Sunset Shimmer has lived in the world of ponies and magic. After these 6 long years, she is ready to go home.
But is she ready to face the one that she had been so mean to only 6 year prior?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 10 )

You have my attention

Looking forward to more. Though i dont like the use of numbers

loving this story!

6346845 I agree. I'm going to go through an edit this story slightly tonight, when there is less traffic. I didn't realise how many numbers I actually used until I went through it after I saw your comment. So thank you for saying that! :twilightsmile:

huh, so your going there. interesting. Through I kinda dislike the whole, lack of info on what angle this is gonna take. Through i guess thats the point of a cliffhanger?

“Sunset Shimmer. You have been brought here today by the High Princess of Equestria, Princess Celestia of the Sun to speak for your crimes against Equestria and Princess Twilight Sparkle of Friendship. These crimes include attempted war against Equestria, attempted usurpation of Equestria, grand robbery of the Element of Magic from Princess Twilight Sparkle, and attempted murder of Princess Twilight Sparkle and the bearers of the Elements of Harmony in the other world.” Princess Celestia proclaimed.

I feel like it should be a guard or a scribe or something who says this, not Celestia herself

6405621 Yeah, I kinda felt that way as well. I took your comment into account, and the chapter has been edited.

i dont like the idea that sunset would grow apart from her human friends that she could just replace them with the pony versions with out any reall thought

some people do keep there high school friends for life

and in series about frindship i just cant see that happening

6681612 I do see where you're getting at. But even though this is a show about friendship, Sunset left Equestria originally because she didn't get what she wanted. Also, Twilight left her friends from Canterlot and we didn't even hear about them again until just this season. And with everyone's different aspirations in this show, I don't think they will all stay in Ponyville for the rest of their lives, but that's just how I see it.
And yes, some people do stay friends with their high school friends afterwards, not always and I think that would be an interesting story dynamic especially for Sunset who's first 'true' friends were the Mane 5/6 depending on whether or not we are counting Sci-Twi.
I'm sorry you didn't really like how I took this idea, and I hope that you find some stories that you like in this AU/headcanon thingy that the fandom has

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