As the first beat sounded, I was off into the world of movement. I moved out of the center of the clearing towards the cottage. I spun once on my front left foreleg to face Star. The baseline kicked in, so I upped the rhythmic movements; Jumping, spinning rising, falling, I did it all. with each passing moment I felt stronger.
Once I started my final spin, I felt so powerful, so amazed that I almost passed out..I dropped to tthe ground and landed on all four legs.
(Stop the Music)
“Whoooooo!” Star clapped his hooves as he cheered.
I blushed, “Was I really that good?”
He pointed at my flank, I looked down.
The emptiness which once had occupied the area was gone, instead there was a set of dancing shoes with a checkmark between them. I fell over and started laughing, I had finally earned my Cutie mark.
“FLUTTERSHY! RAINBOW!” I yelled.
The two mares flew out of the house and landed beside the two of us, Rainbow rearing up into a fighting position.
“Look!” I said frantically as I pointed to my flank.
“Scootaloo!” Fluttershy grabbed me and pulled me into a hug.
Rainbow Dash and Star joined in on the group hum, maybe Dreams really do come true....
Nah, Dreams come true.
________________________________10 years later________________________________________
"Scootaloo, are you ready?"
"Never been better."i said, I was so nervous.
"It'll be fine, see you in a few hours." Star said as he walked away.
Not too many hours later did Scootaloo put on her dress and prepare for the next hour or three. She stood behind the doors as the music began to play.
"Here comes the bride...."
As the doors opened, I started walking, and none other than Star was standing in the grooms position. Dreams....are real.
SEQUEL!!!
Scootaloo being married and having a foal
1706817 I agree with the above statement.
1706817 As do I. But First, let's commend this magnificent author for a job well done.
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I loved this tale.
1706924 Dafuq sorry but it was a lazy ending
1707287 YOU'RE A LAZY ENDING!
A great story! My fave parts had to be the middle when we found out Star was still alive. And I agree with the others up there.
1707356 I'm sorry but all this wait for only 302 words thats kind of lazy
1707419 meh. Suspense. I don't mind.
1707430 Meh maybe sequel would make it better
1707433 Yeah, I think everyone's expecting that.
WHOA WHOA WHOA....
WHADDAFUQ. WE HAD A PLAN, MAN. WE HAD A PLAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
Whatever happened to
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1708499you'll see
1709077 I am intrigued by that statement.
1709077>>1709134 So am I...
1707446 cool
Well, that only felt partly half-assed, but I did love this whole story, one of the two that made Scoots my favorite.
Bravo! Encore! Encore!
Wait, this isn't a concert.
So, will the sequel fill in the bits between Scootaloo's dance school and the wedding?
Damn, I'm a sucker for those kinda endings. Well done good sir, have a toaster. images.mylot.com/userImages/images/postphotos/1997224.jpg Enjoy your toast.