• Published 27th May 2012
  • 3,121 Views, 18 Comments

The Death and Afterlife of Rainbow Dash - Secrets and Lies



Rainbow Dash writes a letter about her journey to Heaven in hopes of her friends reading it.

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The Letter

Comments ( 13 )

This made me cry! It was such a great story! Amazing! :raritycry:

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Thank you very much for the sincere compliments, I'm glad I can make people cry from my writing, (and hopefully feel better in the long run). Your compliments build up my esteem up to write more, so I thank you for commenting on my story with such sweet comments. :pinkiesmile:

why does chapter 2 say 0 words?

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Cause it's just a picture

653779 oh ok. lolz. :rainbowwild::derpytongue2:

awesome job. tracking and faved! keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

Please update. I cannot wait for an update. Please update. I'm begging you. I will make fluttershy cry if you do- Oh I see. Threatening gets people no where. Anyway take this to profess my love for this story and my sorrow for its temporary end.:fluttercry:

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I don't care what you do to Fluttershy, she's my least favorite pony. This is suppose to be a one-shot fic for me. More of experimenting and practicing first person narrative than anything really. How would I update this exactly, where else would I take this story? Rainbow Dash is dead, she can't come back to life. But... I have thought of once writing a sequel to this, but it seems highly unnecessary. Well I thank you for nice comment, it was really thoughtful and something different than, "this made me cry, good job". So again, thanks :pinkiesmile:

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Thanks for the review. This was one of my first one shot fics so thanks for beating me lightly on all the mistakes I made :twilightblush:

Amazing truly amazing. I love this story fav and liking thanks for the big smiles.:scootangel:

Awesome work dude. You did a good job making this story. *Talks to the orcs behind him* Give him a Ten out of Ten!

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Thanks Azog! By the way, you were pretty bad ass in The Battle of Five Armies.

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