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WritingSpirit


Try again. Fail again. Fail better. (Ko-Fi / Tip Jar)

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It is another lovely day.

Something was missing.

It was the pit at the bottom of her gut;
the growing ache in her chest.
The incessant pounding in her brain;
the flood of lights she sees when she rests...

It is another lovely day.


Beautiful image by Author-chan

Later chapters will have violence, gore and sexual themes of a visceral nature. You have been warned.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 14 )

From what I can tell, this story is really neat, at least at the start.
Even if it's not my type of Fanfic, it's still very appealing to me.

I have high hopes for this one :twilightblush:

I just noticed you put the AU tag. I see where this story could never fit with the others :twilightoops: Good choice?

The description reminded me of this.

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Yeah, it's a tag I never really used before until now.
It'll get really dark later on. In fact, with what I had planned in store, I think I might have to switch it to the 'Mature' tag.

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SOAD! Love this band!
The song fits the story pretty well, actually. Kinda strange coincidence right there. :rainbowderp:

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I thought the same.

6453872 Is it that bad? (Or good, in my sense :twilightblush:)

The great and awesome FanfictionAddiction loves durk stiriz

Well, I'm still deciding whether to up vote or not, I actually have decided not to up vote yet, as well, as an amazing story this might start as.. There are some stories which just get repetitive and boring after a couple, if lucky a dozen chapters. But so far.

So gud!

At first i clicked off after five minutes of reading a lot of, fluff and sunshine, but then I glanced at the end of the chapter, and that's when it got interesting... :duck:

I'll definitely give this a favorite, I think it'll go somewhere crazy!

Edit: I also find the quote at the beginning very, very ironic after typing all that.

Just going to put this here:

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Loved that movie.
Call me curious and feedback-seeking, but whatcha think of the story?

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That's how cuckoo I plan for this story to go.
(aside from the fac that I'm finding a reason to post this image)

What. No, really, what?! Tell me more of this story! Things are breaking through, don't leave us hanging!

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I won't, I promise!

Just that I'll take a while to get back on that one, if you know me! :twilightsheepish:

I'm honestly surprised this doesn't have more views.
Your writing is incredible!
I know it's been years, and this story probably isn't going to get finished, but I still loved every word. :twilightsmile:

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Me too here. is quite amazing. I had this story since it was published and is until after all these years that I am catching up with all of this. Hopefully it gets updated

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